Reviews for SubaraXVarlen
JasminWolfsBane chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This is a pretty long chapter, you should think about chopping it into two chapters. Also there are a few spelling mistakes. For example Defiantly should be Definitely, and there is also a tense problem near the end. _ I'm sure you didn't mean to make those mistakes but don't worry we all make mistakes. Good story keep writing it ;)