like always, your work is beautiful! absorving and wonderful. cant wait for more!

i dont think this is how they talk..

: ) Happiness in spades by this, though... I really am looking forward to when they actually get together.

I stayed up until 3:30 to read this story and was saddened to find it a WIP! I am so impatient about waiting for updates! But I'm glad I found it because it's a fun and engaging story and I'm really enjoying this different take you have. I'm hoping Veronica will confide in Logan soon about her rape, it seems like an important something he needs to know.

Yay! you're finally back! great chapter

All I can say is amaaaazing! Every word was perfect! The story line is genius but the dialogue is sexy , hot and heartwarming all blended together w intrigue... Please don't make us wait too long for more of LoVe, Logan's thoughts r so full of true emotion, but then it's funny and sassy also.. More more more ! LoVed every word; please let me have more words to love!

Excellent update, yet again. You are killing me.

I'm glad you didn't leave this part out and skip to the next morning. It was a great read. I just hope Veronica plays nice the next day.

Oh, and I think if Logan ever said that he was "gonna # ! (me) so hard someday" I think my only response would be either, "yes, please" or "does now work for you?" But that's just my opinion. :-)

Wow, you really had V's quips spot on this chapter, especially when she was 'breaking up' with Duncan and talking on the phone with Keith. Good old Veronica Mars humor is always my favorite part.

I concur with your assessment of Facebook in 2004. I was a Freshman in college then (back when it first started and only current college students were allowed on it) and it was literally JUST an online face book. Everyone in college was on it (I tried to resist the urge for as long as I could, but eventually my friend signed me up for it; I should have been strong like Kristen Bell when Cher tried to get her to sign-up for it and said, "ah, no," but alas, I was weak and am now saddled with this potential security busting account for the rest of my life), but pretty much only to stalk each others' profiles and accumulate friends in order to have higher "facebook status." Forums and micro-feeds didn't exist; in fact, I remember we all turned slightly autistic for a while when they introduced micro-feeds, because in a pre-twitter, pre-tumblr world we simply were not equipped to handle all the stimulation (this was back in the day when we all constantly IM'ed each other rather than texting each other; God I'm showing my age right now). But I digress (as I'm often want to do; I just really like reminiscing about college. I think that's half the reason why I love this show that I only watch about a month ago; all the technology and cultural references remind me of my glorious college years).

Anyho, nice insertion of the Buffy reference, especially considering this show is basically Buffy in the real world, but darker and wittier, and minus the camp.

First of all, let me start by stating the obvious: that. Was. Fucking. Hot. You've come a long way from fade-to-black, and these chapters you've given us (along with Neptune) is a solid example how fanfiction can serve perfect mix of eroticization and emotionalization. Although plot-wise we don't see much progress, we gain insights as to the boundaries L and V still have in their relationship, and leaves us questions fundamental to the future chapters (w/ these two, is the physicality separable from feelings? When will Logan address V's insecurities about Lilly? And will V accept this, if ever?) Dry humping may not solve much, but stopping there moves their relationship forward. Plus I enjoyed every sentence in there so yep. Also, it doesn't feel excessive. Each encounter you give us feels necessary for their growth. I think I'd never get tired of reading all permutations; they can make sweet love in a boat or a goat, as long as you write it, I'm reading it.

PS did Duncan and partner hear the moaning next door? Because I'd love to see if it shakes him up a bit.

Corny is nice! Fun chapter, even with the information about the salt lick coming out. (I am glad that is out in the open.) Magic vs science made me smile.

“…My head’s still spinning.” “From me or the alligator?” Haha – Love that Logan would want to know this in the midst of facing down a gator.

Hmmm…she’s lusting WHILE admiring his hat. Clever how you slipped that in there.

*snort* Logan would quote Dawson’s Creek.

Swallow a bullet/deserved the outcome? No, no, no Logan. You’re killing me with feels here!

…And the next minute you’re making me scream at him. JUST KISS HER DAMMIT!

Adore seeing their playful side, and his thought about her suppressing her personality while dating Duncan – hilarious! Definitely saw a lot of that in S2.

Wow. Then you go and make things all hot and heavy and light and teasing between them all in one scene. Logan is trying so hard to be a better person and do the right thing so he doesn’t ruin things between them, it’s deliciously painful to read.

Great chapter. Can’t wait to read how things are between them in the morning. Um, soon please?! And how was I not following this story already?

Unfortunately, I have the inability to see detailed action sequences in my head when I'm reading. I can't really imagine them that well; I suppose that's why I have trouble writing them too. But, I could sure hear the whole chase and see their emotional responses very clearly. Great job, and kudos for writing such a long and detailed sequence!

Phew. It's a bit hot in here...

When I got my email I pretty much was like "UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" because this story deserves one of those. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what these crazy kids gets into next.

Okay, so the snide remarks L and V made at the tv while watching the classmates' interview are SO spot on. I especially liked Logan's, "as long as I can say 'bitch' in a motel room," and Veronica's, "that's just your bulimia talking." It's hard to find a fanfic with dialogue so snarky and in character for these two, so I love it. The 'Duncan' subconscious thinking parts are very interesting and revealing as well.

Loving this story so far. I just started reading it after I saw a plug for it on Tumblr yesterday. Can't wait to continue!