|Reviews for Wally's Secret|
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 27 . 3/6/2017
Love the first three lines :-D
Also fun with Wally wondering how he is related to Ron and continuing to mock the Quidditich fanatics (except Wally is serious)
Good to acknowledge that vigilantism is illegal but done anyways
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 25 . 3/6/2017
Seeing the confessions without the jumping around on the timeline was an interesting experience, like realizing how quickly they all came to their decision to stand by each other.
Like Wally trying to rally his thoughts at the sight of M'gann but overruled by his body, and then Conner's actions (huge Supermartian fan ;-) )
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 24 . 3/6/2017
Connecting "brooding" with "Santa Hat" for Batman was a nice touch.
Christmas was very well done from the presents, first time for the aliens, and the kiss
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 23 . 3/6/2017
Nice use of how Wally and Artemis interact more in this AU
Yeah, Harry should use that map more. Pity it cannot be used to report certain stuff
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 18 . 3/6/2017
Yeah, that therapy would not hurt. Ron has other issues too of course. Harry too of course
Surprise with Hermione getting involved like this
Memory alteration is a slippery slope, especially as we saw with M'gann as she progressed over season 1 to 2
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 17 . 3/6/2017
LOL for Wally's admittedly true description of what he does back home
X-D for "Who will teach us lessons!?" Typical
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 16 . 3/6/2017
LOL well Conner's acting improved a ton by the end of the season
Would have almost been amusing if Siruis had run into Wally while trying to sneak in
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 15 . 3/6/2017
Nice work slipping in the Endgame scenario. Most fics overlook how these are KIDS acting as child soldiers, and Wally has to cover two secret identities
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 3/6/2017
Good to address at the end how widespread and devastating this attack would have been, beyond just those firemen. Also showing how insulated Hogwarts is, being unaware of how the attack was global in scale
X-D for the end with Black!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 3/6/2017
LOL for Wally not cuing into the reason for Conner's degree of concern for M'gann. Still good that she called him out on it
Not so sure Wally would have learnt that spell yet. Harry got it in his 4th year with special lessons for the 3rd Task, while Lupin seems more focused on Dark Creatures than spellwork
Good to see the issue of addressing secrets here, as well as addressing more why it has to remain.
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 3/6/2017
Good touch pointing out that Wally must have been pressed into molten metal for that trap to work. Continued appreciation and utility with science despite his magic also good
Given the growing utility of his magic, Wally must be really wanting to tell his Team so that they can use it for their missions
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 3/6/2017
How sucky the Wizarding judicial system has been addressed before, but you take it a step further than I have seen before, particularly in terms of evidence and witnesses
X-D Wally so exhausted and weary from his life-and-death mission that appears so believable that he was sick!
Good touch with Wally missing the Boggart, would raise too many questions
LOL with Wally and Artemis in the same school, something I have not seen before
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 3/6/2017
LOL nice touch how even in Wally's POV he refers to Artemis as "Beautiful"
Batman gets a lot of flack (deserved) for his lethal policies in "Batman v Superman", but in hindsight Artemis could have killed those guys too. Granted her actions were self-defense against overwhelming force when she was being attacked for unknown reasons
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 3/6/2017
Good argument for Gryffindor over Ravenclaw
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/21/2017
Robin began to "smirk"