Reviews for A mryoung fanfic
Guest chapter 3 . 11/17/2012
Like it hope echo and Adam end up together update soon
Golden Love chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Alright then
amazing girl chapter 3 . 9/17/2012
This seems like it will be a good story
Basjetball chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
Glad you took my advice with the paragraphs. Anyways, this seems pretty good and don't worry, writer block is what all the writers have to endure.
cadule246 chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
like it keep going
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
Oh, cat fight! I LUV IT!* Goid job keep it up (:
LoveShipper chapter 2 . 7/13/2012
Great two sisters figthing over Adam and he has no idea. This should be interesting
LoveShipper chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Ohh Echo must have a twin and one likes Adam and the other one has no idea if she does. Interesting
Basjetball chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
It's different, two echos?

Sound interesting...though I struggled to read this. You wrote all that in 6 paragraphs where it seemed you might've need more where it probably should've needed around 10-15 paragraphs or something, because it seemed like it's a lot of sentences jammed into one paragraph.

Also, you really didn't have quotations which is for speaking.

However, the idea was different and the grammar was good, but if you followed my feedback, it would've been better and easier to read.