|Reviews for Nervous|
| ShowTime chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
It's like I've read half of this someplace else. :P
Obviously not all of it, but come on, don't be lazy and use half of what you had in story and put it into another. I mean this is still a nice story, and you didn't use all of the Clare-in-lingerie part, but still. This was good :)
| alicia4568 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
that was great!
| eclareismeantobe chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
wow how did i not ever read this before.i loved it. i like how it wasn't just sex, but it built it up from their reunion at the Torres party to moving in together. I like how they waited to make love because it is something that makes me think of Eli and Clare. They were both too nervous to speak up about wanting more then just the same old thing and I am glad Clare took control and went after what she wanted, this was amazing
| TurboWiz70 chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I loved this! Is this a one-shot? I hope not. If it is, though, great job!
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I will be totally honest with you: I do not like smut. So often smut just focuses on sex, not relationships and the quality of writing fails as the sex scenes take front and center. However, this is not the case with this. I stumbled on it, and decided to give it a chance, and I am so happy I did!
You wrote it beautifully. I try not to review without giving constructive criticism, so I will: You have some small errors. Words that are supposed to end in "ing" don't. It doesn't take away from the story, but it's something you can work on. If you proof-read and fixed those little things, this story would be more than perfect; as it is perfect as is.
I love how you focuses on the characters and their passion and love for one another. You didn't jump right into a sex scene. You built up to it, forming a background of the couple and introducing us to where they are in the stage of their relationship. The sex isn't OOC at all with how you developed the background. Eli and Clare waited a long time, and I love how you mentioned their parents.
I also enjoy Clare being a bit more dominate and Eli being squrimy and nervous. That, to me, is adorable. I love how it wasn't just sex - it was making love with how beautifully you wrote it. Smut sometimes is just sex, and bad writing gets gobs of reviews just because of smut. However, this story deserves more reviews. You focus on the writing and of the character development. You focus on so much. The smut is a big part of the story, but Eli and Clare's romance is the focus, and to me that is beautiful.
Thank you so much for writing this! You are an excellent writer, and I hope you keep up the good work! Once again, beautiful, excellent writing. A job well done. Thank you for making my day with this story :)
| The Cliffhanger Girl chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This was amazing smut! Lovely job :D
| SweettFace chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Loved it! :)
| storyofnatasha chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
dasasdkal;fjsjkl; omfg this is perfect!
| fmunros chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Whoa. Mind blown... you're a great writer! :) x
| BabyLollipopGirl32 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Okay now I'm really curious? Who is Asher? I really want too know!
| bunnybabe247 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
wow amazing story i love how it was detailed but not to detailed to be disturbing...truly amazing writing.