|Reviews for One Heart: Beating|
| Countess of Monleigh chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I love this. Its short, cute, and sweet. Hope to see more like it from you.
| Vaako chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
That was beautiful :')
| Yumeno chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
How lovely story ! I liked it, really.
Thank you for this short but adorable fiction. You have chosen words which were simple but moving.
What a pity we can not "romance" a pawn like this ! x)
( sorry for my mistakes, I'm french )
| darkloveeden chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
nice short story :P
| banxi chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
This is beautiful - I love it! Very well structured, your use of adjectives and single-sentence paragraphs is moving. (: