Reviews for One Heart: Beating
A chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
Nicely written
Countess of Monleigh chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I love this. Its short, cute, and sweet. Hope to see more like it from you.

idonotwanttobehere chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
That was beautiful :')
Yumeno chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
How lovely story ! I liked it, really.
Thank you for this short but adorable fiction. You have chosen words which were simple but moving.

What a pity we can not "romance" a pawn like this ! x)

( sorry for my mistakes, I'm french )
darkloveeden chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
nice short story :P
banxi chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
This is beautiful - I love it! Very well structured, your use of adjectives and single-sentence paragraphs is moving. (: