|Reviews for Four Days|
| amy.d.fuller.9 chapter 21 . 5/24
Okay . . . just finished this and it is a wonderful story. I love the way you came up with the Chitauri blood as a chemical agent, especially one that ignites on contact. Your writing really is quite good. You had me hooked from the first chapter and I read this in one sitting, even skipping supper. I'm sorry you think your writing sucks, because it does not. Trust me, I've been reading for 54 years and I know. Your characterizations were very good, your plot quite good, your research payed off, and YES this story DOES deserve a sequel. Clint is a mess mentally as you pointed out in the last three paragraphs of your story, and I kinda hate the idea of just leaving him in this situation, even if later he does get a cat. :-)
Having said all that, I would like to request what you have written as a sequel. I'm just betting what you've written so far is not nearly as shitty as you think. Thanks for writing and sharing this with us!
| Ms. Hawkeye chapter 21 . 7/12/2014
Really unique story! Are you considering re-writing the sequel?
| finaljoy chapter 21 . 5/24/2014
Oh my goodness, I can't even express how much I aggressively adore this story. I love how you handled Clint completely falling apart, and how everyone else had to then adapt and work to help him. Everyone's character was wonderful and spot on, and I like how Clint's addiction wasn't something that remained isolated. It truly affected other parts of his life, sometimes with disastrous consequences.
Your style is amazing. I like how personal the narration was, despite being third person, and I want to absorb so many of your techniques into my writing, ugh! I wish I could comment on everything that I liked and that I found good, but it's all just a glorious haze and I can't even.
Thank you so much for posting this story, and I hope you keep on writing :)
| caolan chapter 21 . 9/27/2013
Have you seen the SHIELD pilot? cause the plot is strangely similar to your exploding people
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/4/2013
| Kiiimberly chapter 21 . 8/1/2013
Very believable progression.
| Kiiimberly chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
Definitely a lose-lose situation.
| Kiiimberly chapter 17 . 8/1/2013
Great that he made the right choice this time.
| Kiiimberly chapter 16 . 8/1/2013
Haha! Very practical lessons!
| Kyu-Momo chapter 22 . 7/4/2013
| caolan chapter 21 . 5/25/2013
ah, this is fantastic! a pleasure to read, and in a style similar to the marvel works, particularly with regard to characters' behavior and even thoughts! please, do the world a favor and keep writing.
| shadowsontherun chapter 22 . 3/6/2013
Loved it :) amazing story :) i think your team dynamic is amazing :) no clintasha but that's okay because the storyline is already epic enough XD i do would when everythinf blows over are there any feelings betwern them in your universe? Clintasha works romantically and platonically so its all good :)
| chris.h.olds chapter 20 . 2/20/2013
I like how you wrote Clint's reaction to Sadovsky's taunting. I always like your stories & am looking forward to reading more.
| gloriousanon chapter 22 . 1/16/2013
this was a beautifully written story. i can envision everything perfectly; your writing, god, it's just so... amazing. i know you've heard over 200 reviews worth of how incredible you really are, but here's another. wow. now to keep working through your other stories! please, never stop.
| Guest chapter 22 . 12/21/2012
Brilliant! I loved it