Reviews for The Last Day
DeadLight63 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
That was pretty cool. While you are good at capturing the inner thoughts of characters, I would reccomend you worl a little on the more emotional side as well. You have to remember Clove meant a lot to Cato, and you don't really go into that. But even with that, it's pretty cool how you fleshed out Cato, making him just a little more likable.