Reviews for The Moment That Changed There Lives
MistyBlue96 chapter 1 . 2/23
The capitals thing is seriously irritating. PLEASE fix that. It's taking the focus away from the story and not to mention, terrible grammar.

The plot itself isn't bad, but these errors have to be fixed before the readers can begin to enjoy it.
Princess Jasmine chapter 3 . 9/13/2014
This is such a good story you must write more! I suggest you include the marriage and the sex and children topic. I hope to see more writing from you! Such a cliffhanger!
Regards,
Princess Jasmine
Guest chapter 3 . 6/21/2014
you should finish this fic
llaulli chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
xdssssssssssssssssssssss
Fail chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
What's with all the capitals man? Seriously! And you can't spell. Try again.
Daisyline chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
Haha. Awesome(;
Break her heart and I'll Break you
That's funny(;
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
good:)
continue;)

love ya;$
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
*puts thumbs up*
good job. please continue;)

-Blessed yet cursed
Alyssa chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Short story, real romance!
Ellice123 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Are you gonna continue it cause I would luv you to.
Daisyline chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Good
Some confusion, but over all it was amazing (:
Blessed Yet Cursed chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
:)
deltora quest fan 1 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Hey this is a cool story i would love to see more