|Reviews for When He Taught Me How To Dance|
| Michal chapter 16 . 4/20
This is really good! Please don't stop, that last chapter was an excellant cliff hanger.
| waistedyouth chapter 16 . 3/28
I love this! I really like Rose as a character! And how you have portrayed captain Nicholls as well! Please continue?!
| Lady Avotil chapter 16 . 2/2
Oh, I most certainly enjoyed this chapter and I'd say that your muse is definitely coming back, even if you haven't updated this story very recently. I have /really/ enjoyed reading it and I sincerely hope that you will eventually continue it. It's no understatement on my part when I say that I'm in love with Rosie and Jim and even Alice and Imogen have grown on me.
The character development is excellent and I haven't noticed any plot holes, which makes this story even /better/. Avoiding plot holes is not as easy as it may first seem, but you've managed to do that quite well so far. Your descriptions are great too and your writing style just...flows, for lack of a better word. There's a lovely continuity and you certainly have managed to create a great story flow - particularly the last chapter. SO many highs and lows (as I like to call them)! Even if it ends on a sad note. I feel so sad for Jim and Gina... :(
This story definitely has a lot of potential and I hope you'll update it soon. :)
Keep up the fantastic work and please, please, please write and post the next chapter a.s.a.p.! I'm really looking forward to it!
| Fiera Evenstar chapter 16 . 1/28
I am absolutely in love with this story-and the cliffhanger is killing me darling, really-and I would be very happy if you were to continue!
This has a magnificent plot line and characters, and description. Keep up the marvelous work!
| Mia chapter 16 . 12/19/2015
Ok seriously you need to continue with this story or I am going to explode!
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/20/2015
I absolutely adore this story! It's phenomenal! I hope you will get the inspiration to come back to it soon!
| LegandsOfTime chapter 16 . 11/22/2015
I love this story! Please update!
| Aliceoflegend chapter 16 . 4/22/2015
nooooooooooooooo! dying! drama! love! gah! such suspense! you MUST be planning on finishing this story - it has so far to go! so well-written! so beautiful and multi-dimensional! xxx
| Aliceoflegend chapter 14 . 4/22/2015
Such a beautiful chapter - you have a gift for expression, kissing scenes can easily be clichéd and unexciting. This kiss was NONE of those things!
| Aliceoflegend chapter 3 . 4/21/2015
EEEEEKKKKKK! I screamed - so narnia! but in a good way! Just stunning! Quick question - are you still writing this fic? It does not say complete, and the last update was in like 2012, so i was just wondering. . .
| Aliceoflegend chapter 1 . 4/21/2015
eeeek! So excited! This looks lick such a good story - our lady here seems to be a very real and believable character. Her description - green eyes, black hair, tall and lanky - has something of the Loki about it ;) Can't wait to read on and find out what happens next!
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/1/2015
OMG I'm in love! Your story has barged right into my heart and I'm happy to say I'm OK with that! I can't wait for your next update :D
| xemx chapter 16 . 3/9/2015
PLEASE UPDATE :'(
| CallMeCarrots chapter 16 . 1/19/2015
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME ON SUCH AN EMOTIONAL CLIFFHANGER! YOU GET BACK HERE AND FINISH ANOTHER CHAPTER AT ONCE YOUNG LADY! YOU CANT JUST RIGHT THE MOST AMAZING PEICE OF LITERATURE EVER KNOWN TO MANKIND AND THEN LEAVE ME TO DROWN IN MY SORROWS!
| icecoatedsha chapter 15 . 1/15/2015
UPDATE PLEASE! It has been far too long since the last one, and any story good enough to keep me up a two in the morning deserves it.