Reviews for The Sky is the Beginning
SuperminionXD chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
I love how you describe her waking up, it's really good.
Did I mention that I really like this story, cause I do.
Please update soon!
SuperminionXD
SuperminionXD chapter 6 . 3/5/2013
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE you used Kasai! (Squeals hyperly XD) sorry I have not read or reviewed in ages but for some reason my E-mail stopped telling me.
Please continue!
SuperminionXD
AzureShadowMoon chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
Nice, an update! A few grammar errors, alot dealing with comma's which you should really use more of. If not, devide some sentences up to make it sound more fluid instead of choppy.

Ah, the famous spell check errors. It brings back memories...

(o-')b Keep writing!
KiyomiShizuru chapter 6 . 12/4/2012
this is awesome :)
AzureShadowMoon chapter 7 . 12/1/2012
Dawww you make me blush.
Now frikin update. I mean it.
AzureShadowMoon chapter 6 . 11/11/2012
Toots...should eat a tootsie roll.
He sounds like an old grandpa. Remembering the past...
SuperminionXD chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
Yay! She is a Macaw, thats a type of parrot isnt it, that is so cool, I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update soon! I love her wings! Oh and I'm sorry for my short chapters in my fic, but that was just the first one, I will try to make them longer from now on.
Superminion XD
RadihaEcho77 chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
This is a really good story oh and thanks again for the help with my story.
AzureShadowMoon chapter 5 . 8/23/2012
Dawn's on whacky drugs.
Someone call the po-po's. Toots gonna get screwed.
SuperminionXD chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
I like how you describe the metamorphosis, its really good.
Also I like the idea that there is a plot to abduct her.
Superminion XD
AzureShadowMoon chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
Watch out! Creepy voice gonna shoot you!
Stop, drop, and roll!
SuperminionXD chapter 3 . 7/17/2012
I like your story, what animal is dawn going to be? is it some sort of bird? is she going to meet the others? cause that would be really cool, is she going to save them from something? is it set before or after the end of the last series? sorry for asking so many questions i do that alot!
Superminion XD
CelticLily chapter 2 . 7/17/2012
XD Love the drowning bits they were hilarious! This is a very good story so far
I'm a Nerd and Proud chapter 3 . 7/15/2012
:) Really good! Update soon, please? See you soon!
I'm a Nerd and Proud chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
:) Better than the last, good job! :P
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