|Reviews for Don't Look|
| kci47 chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
I love any time you write Luna, you really capture her thoughts and emotions well! I can envision this setting so clearly.
| owluvr chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Aw, poor Luna. I feel so bad for her...I really hate bullying, it's so horrible, isn't it? You know, sometimes I picture Luna like that, like sometimes she does actually care what other people say about her, and why wouldn't she? She's only human, after all. Anyway, great story!
| Black Rose Blue chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I know this is non-magic AU, but yet it feels like it could be in the books themselves. I love the way you've described Luna, and this story is defiantly going to be in my mind the next time I read the last three books. Wonderful job.
| The Original Horcrux chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Ooooohhh, I've never read a non magic AU before :) (if truth be told I dont normally read then anyway :p) but this was really good! I really liked the fact that you used Luna because you write Luna very well. I just couldnt help but feel sorry for her.
I don't know if I've been watching too many American movies or if I'm losing my mind, but this gives me a more American School feeling rather than a British one, but it's AU you can do whatever you want :) great job!
| Exceeds Expectations chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Poor Luna :(
It really is lucky for Luna that she grew up in a society where strangeness was a little more tolerated. Sure, they laughed and jeered, but I think she had more of a chance in the magic world. I liked this though.
My one complaint is that it reads a bit to "American high school", you know? If that's what you were going for then nevermind :P
| autumn midnights chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Generally, I don't read non-magic AUs because I don't really like the idea, but I really enjoyed yours. I like how it's focused on Luna, and how it's non-romantic, because it seems like the non-magic AUs I've seen are just various ways to get Harry and Draco or Draco and Hermione together in a different way, and I can honestly say I've never seen one like this. I like your portrayal of Luna, as well. She's not exactly how she is in canon, yet there are some certain similarities. I can picture her being odd even in a Muggle situation like this, and people would pick on her for it like they do here. You show the situation very well, and your writing is fabulous. I really feel bad for her here - you've shown her emotions in a really heart-wrenching way, and I love Luna, too, so I can really feel for her. Overall, nice work!
| Selenehekate chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Are those lyrics at the beginning? What are they from? This is really weird to read, haha. It's certainly well written, though I still can't get over the whole non-magic AU thing. Though I like how you wrote Luna, so good job!
| lowi chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Oh my, this was amazing. It's been a while since I read a non-magic!AU in the HP fandom, and, I have to say, you write that perfectly. Luna was so true to her character and I felt so bad for her, and just ughhhhh. Lovely. And heartbreaking.
Also, I loved the brackets you'd put in, especially the ones that described her apple and milk cartoon, for some reason!
| Couture Girl chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Even being a muggle she gets bullied! That's so unfair but well very real. You muggle!Luna is so real :) I love her! I imagine witch!Luna would be like this. Because well Luna isn't a Gryffindor...Gamma I'm so proud of you for writing things you'd never though *coughSMUTcough* and *coughTHIScough* This was amazing! short and sad but good to read :)
P.S. Somehow my mind thought the smirking boy was Draco x)
| haileepotter13 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
How do you go to the next chapter? Please tell me how :(