|Reviews for Tempest|
| Sarekkandarikulover chapter 6 . 14h ago
Please update, it's a sin for this amazing fic to just wait for an update for this longT_T
| Guest chapter 6 . 14h ago
The story must go on!
I love shikamarus father and I like the little cute Sasuke... And that naruto isn't alone. You awakened my interest and I'm glad you had!
Im from germany and I love this story! German stories aren't enough anymore so I switched to english ones, your story is realistic and I agree with the charakters. I think, it might happened like that.
So I waiting for the new chapter!
| Pearl Byakugan chapter 6 . 3/7
This is a very promising story, and I look forward to reading more chapters. I like the character development that's happening with almost every character, which ties in with the changing of various events. I hope you plan on continuing it sometime in the future, because I'll be waiting! :)
| Hana chapter 6 . 3/6
Currently I'm really enjoying your fan fiction, I love reading about time-travel stories and 'Tempest' is one of the greatest I've read so far. Sakura's journey as a 4 and now 5 year old is depicted with interesting encounters with major characters that show, in my opinion, good knowledge of the sort of person each character is. - Looking forward to how her interactions with Kakashi will go :)
I hope that you update this story soon but I also understand if you do not find the time - there are simply so many things that need to be done in life!
As a last note: Great grammar and Spelling! I'm very picky about this when I read and usually stop reading a story as soon as I spot 5 mistakes in the first chapter - so Kudos to you for that!
| Dragon's Shaow chapter 6 . 3/5
You're doing really well as a writer!
| ri.sparrow.black chapter 6 . 3/3
I look forward to seeing Sakura with Kakashi and Genma. More boys for her to manage lol
| TheInescapableFate chapter 6 . 3/2
This is sooooo good! The line "You can both teach her." Is so cute, I can picture Genma's senbon slipping from his lips and Kakashi's only visible eye widening a fraction. Please update again, sometime? :)
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/2
Love this story. Hope you will update this soon :)
| Uncertain Shifter chapter 5 . 2/27
Hope you can update this year! :)
| Floofy bunny chapter 6 . 2/25
THIS PLOT IS AMAZING! haha I really want to see more interactions between Kakashi and Sakura and Genma and Sasuke and Naruto please update!
| JelloXGiggles chapter 6 . 2/21
UPDATE! DO IT!
| NarutoFallenAngel123 chapter 6 . 2/19
Oh I just love how u are writing this story! I will admit that Sakura is a little too much like a Mary-sue, but I do like the way u show the subtle way you depict the cause and effect of sakura's presence. My favorite interactions would probably be with Itachi and shisui. They are both adorable in their way! So please continue! It looks like you haven't done so for about a year, but I do urge u to do so! Anyways Thanks and have a nice day/night! :3
| NarutoFallenAngel123 chapter 1 . 2/19
I love this, but I am a little confused. This may be because I haven't really gotten into Naruto Shippuden, but do they all really die? Or is this just something u made up? Please tell me. Ok, thanks and I'll just continue to chapter 2 :3
| Snickerdoodle97 chapter 6 . 2/15
this is amazing!
| Idle chapter 6 . 2/15
I rather love your dialogue, it cracks me up. I think the writing style Isn't as in-depth as I would like, but as I read I'm finding I don't mind since I like the story so much. Keep up the good work!