Reviews for daddy is a sexy beast
russ chapter 1 . 6/20
fucking brill I wish that was me x you lucky man
Ideamakerhopeful chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
You should totally make this where three years pass and max and jeb still do it then fang who's like 24 comes and takes her away and teaches her about the world outside and then have lemons
Ttyl chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Hot it made me wet yum
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
can you please update
like its a really good begging
please don't make it a one shot
update!
Amy Shaar chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Personally I think you should keep it as a one-shot, it's perfect the way it is and if you put in any more chapters I felt it will ruin it. But that's just my opinion, you really can't go wrong when your writing's this good :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
i think you should add more on to this story
like how in the beginning she was saying to her father to come back after his work to "do more stuff to her", u should write about that
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Write another chapter! Explain the men with cameras, and more about Max's life, and her nights.
izzy chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
I Want More! Please!
rowan night chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
please update another chapter as soon as possible! I need to know more! is the video they filmed for porn? Is fang and the rest of the flock going to come up in the story? I HAVE TO KNOW!
Ellaluvsya11 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Oh GOD! Soooo wet right now! You need to write more!
Jo chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Please can u write more I can't get enough write another one love ya
Jo
gummybearsofawesomeness chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Three words I feel wet ur really good write more
Byeee chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Write another chapter!
angelangel31 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
it made me wet just by reading it : )
mak28 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
When are you going to continue? Love the story.
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