|Reviews for One Last Time|
| Spider and the Fly chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
you're so mean!
| himurarikuo chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
Your insight into the events and characters of Drug and Drop is excellent
I go from 'poor Kazahaya' to 'poor Rikuo'... I guess that is just how it is with them two at the moment
| Yumi Kei chapter 6 . 11/1/2012
Writers block happens to everyone! (especially me, cos I suck). So don't worry. Feel better and relax! *sends juice and feels good yums*
| Oky Verlo chapter 6 . 10/29/2012
Happy birthday in six days. Have a hug! Is my present to you.
Update as soon as you're ready hun; hopefully none of us are
selfish enough to be jerks about waiting.
Toodles and Love
| SoubixLoveless chapter 6 . 10/28/2012
Soooo what's on your wish list?
| Sprig chapter 5 . 10/23/2012
oh god...poor Kazahaya. he sure can't catch a break can he? damn you got me hooked on this story! i'm your new buddy now! lol!
| SoubixLoveless chapter 5 . 9/12/2012
WHAT. WHAT WHAT WHAT?! NONONO. NO. KAZAHAYA. COME BACK. OHMAHGAWD.
| Professur chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
my its quite important that kazahaya is like a bag of rice. is this rice's revenge for never being cooked properly...?
| Yumi Kei chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
Crazy things going on here... I read it really fast though, cos that was the tempo in this chapter, but it was completely unnecessary.
Never rush, even if you are behind on updates (hence why I am always uber late on my chapters :P) cos then the reader might not be satisfied after the wait.
But, I am glad you posted, and It's good to see the story move along.
Geez, first Kazahaya is sick, now he's kidnapped, he's always so unlucky lol
Two things that really stuck out to me. This line: "Rikuo halted and fell to his knees. He lifted his fists to the air, and shook them. He let out an anguished cry."
XDD really? You should have had him cry, "Noooo!" as well. Sorry, but this whole movement killed any dramatic mood. It was cliche and uninspiring.. and made me snicker.
Also, when Kakei asks if the dudes were "successful" in kidnapping Kazahaya... not necessary, obviously they were unsuccessful, he's right there!
Buh, sorry my dear editor. Hope all goes well in the next chapter :)
| wantsmorenow chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
Omgosh. I just started reading and You had me in tears when Rikuo told Kaza to leave.
Poor kid. ; ;
I can't wait to read more though. You're sending me on an emotional roller coaster here lol
| OtakusUnite chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Asdfghjklllskddndkd- I like this story so far! :D Aww I love how you potrayed Kakei ; 3 ; he's like mama Poor Kazahaya! I can't wait to see what happens next *u* Please keep upadting! You're doing a wonderful job, m'dear
| Oky Verlo chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Aww, very cute while also very exciting! I look forward t what else you shall produce!
Toodles and Love
| NoodleFighter chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
I'm sooooo sorry ! I wasn't able to go on internet these days, so I read your chapter only today !
Well done, once again.
Before I read your chapter, I was thinking "nooo, Kaza is going to be kidnapped, or he's going to return to his sister and Rikuo and Kaza won't be together any more T.T", as in the real manga.
SPOILERS(do you read the scan ? It's horrible, it's been two or three chapters we don't see Rikuo, namely three months without Kaza/Rikuo fluffiness. It's hard to live, man)SPOILERS
Ah, so much cliffhanger, I can't wait to see what's going on ! WTF, why Tsukiko is here ? Why Kaza isn't surprised to hear her in his head ? We don't see very well Rikuo's reaction when he saw her, but I'm sure it will be developed in the next chapter (same for the previous chapter, I'm sorry I criticised whereas you was going to do that in this chapter -the beginning was well done, by the way)
Anyway, I'm glad Rikuo preferred to worry about Kaza instead of caring about Tsukiko, it makes him "bastard-less" :)
Yeah, Rikuo was a bit OOC at the end, but oh well, once in a while doesn't kill I guess ! It was funny to see a submissive Rikuo, it changes.
Yay for the next chapter !
PS : It's been a while-well, for me :P- since your last chapter. Please, tell me you're going to continue this fic . ! (if not, I'm going to do seppuku!)
| ChernobylKrigare chapter 4 . 7/23/2012
That's not the end is it? This goes by so quickly. Enjoyable though.
| Sorrowfulchild chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
Sooooo cute !