Reviews for Sea Green
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I really enjoyed this entry. It was such a creative story line.
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
aww loved it! jasper the mer-man...hot! great story bb xxx
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Aww so sweet, I read this before under the competition, but I just had to read it again. Thks for sharing, Debbie
bbbluez chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Lovely story.
tds88 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Mere-sper...I can only imagine how hot he would look. I don't know why, but I do love the mythical aspect of this story.
SimplyMatt chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I love this story so much, the modern take on the little mermaid (kinda) although this is not one to read to your children, unless you edit out the delights hehe.

brilliant babe, sux u didnt place xxx
harrytwifan chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I adored this story when reading it for the contest. iI should have known it was you! Your imagination is amazing! Great job, and thanks for such an entertaining and different story.
Nancy
TwistedforTwilight chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
This was really well written, and so creative and out of the ordinary.

Once it was revealed that Jasper is a mere-man I wondered how this could possibly end well, but you managed to do it!

Although, it makes me wonder how Jasper will acclimate to human life.

Thank you so much for participating, and writing something so very different from anything else I've ever read. It was pure enjoyment.

Deb
twilightmenrhot chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
A fun, sweet original story.