|Reviews for Death is Only the Beginning|
| misuky7 chapter 22 . 10/24/2014
This was amazing. Absolutely brilliant. I love that Tess got another chance at life and all the changes she made to the new timeline. I loved all the shippings, Lex and Lana, and Oliver and Chloe. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. :3
| Clark Luthor 322 chapter 6 . 1/1/2014
Just wanted to say I loved this chapter I think that Lexmas was a
real turning point for Lex I have no doubt that if Lana would have
lived he would have been a good guy so thanks for the rewrite
I very much enjoyed it
| demonic hellfire chapter 15 . 12/19/2013
Possessed by Mon-El if I remember correctly
| spazzygaz chapter 22 . 11/28/2013
Found this story and ended up finishing in one day, really good. I liked what you did with the premise, not just making Tess a perfect element, but showing the way her presence has changed things outside of her knowledge, but that overall she had a positive influence. Awesome.
| liron-aria chapter 22 . 11/9/2013
I read this before, and left a review, but apparently, I did it as a guest, so now I'm leaving another review, this time from my actual account, because this story is just fabulous. I love that Tess got a happy ending, and all the relationships you built, and saving Jonathan and Lionel and Lex, and did I mention I LOVE that Tess got a happy ending? Seriously, watching these characters grow and change without the giant clusterf*** that was some of their lives in canon was a real treat.
Thanks so much for sharing!
| Miss Dreavus chapter 22 . 8/4/2013
So I finished it!
Again, really great plot, I enjoyed it very much. The characters from Smallville still had some of their
uniqueness and voice.
If you get a beta reader to help you with your synthax, your stories are right up there!
| Miss Dreavus chapter 10 . 7/29/2013
This is a good story! I really like Clark and Tess; not enough stories are about them!
I just have something to say about your syntax and grammar. Have you ever considered
using a beta reader? Some of your sentences could need help in their structure, just saying.
I you would fix that small problem, you would yourself a really nice fic, because your story is
Sidenote: Is Lois going to be a part of this story? (Even though it's already completed... lol)
| edboy4926 chapter 22 . 7/22/2013
Nice in the pairing.
Though a little angry that you killed Davis and Tina like that, jeez I thought I finally found a fic where Davis is good and lives in the end. Another disappointment in that hopefulness.
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/2/2013
I cannot express how happy this fic makes me. Like, there aren't even words. I adore Tess Mercer, and after the major angstfest that is her collection of fics on this site, I really needed a fix-it like this. You did a great job with the characters, and balancing out the positives and negatives of time travel - like with Bart originally working against the team, and Tina and Davis' eventual demise.
Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 22 . 5/18/2013
i love this fic !
| ssj3gohan007 chapter 22 . 5/8/2013
Great story! Very nice ending! It's sad that some people had to die but I guess I guess an ending with no loss of life is impractical and too fairy tale-like.
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 22 . 3/14/2013
I have been looking for a story like this forever and I must say this is definitely one of the best smallville fanfics that I have ever read. Well Done and thanks for a wonderful read.
| MC chapter 21 . 3/3/2013
A. You really like to make people shaped dents in walls, don't you?
B. you took that whole quote from justice league, lol
| HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 22 . 1/21/2013
I loved this story (especially since I saw some of the things I wished had happened in canon in here -ex. saving and giving purpose to the meteor mutants instead of just killing them off after an episode or two so Clark is the only one in town who gets to have powers-; Conner's middle name being Alexander; the Kandorians finding a way to live peacefully and Raya surviving instead of just killing them off so Clark is the only Kryptonian who gets to be on Earth or alive; etc.). I wanted to write a Smallville story, but I don't know much about the DC Universe and I want my stories to be as accurate as I can make them. Reading this story was a great consolation for not being able to write my own story (the way I want it to be).
| Lydia Syrena Arya Winchester chapter 22 . 1/21/2013
Loved it. This was an amazing story.