Reviews for When You Pass My Grave
Phyonnah chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Very well written ... And I absolutely love this song. When I saw the title and the summary I started singing the song in my head and so I knew in that second I had to read this. It was a nice story. Thanks for writing it and please write some more.
Lothmel chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
To be honest I don't think Roy or Riza pass fame alchemy to theirs children. Roy despised his power, he hate think about himself or other pepole (special his own kids) like they were wepon. Maybe he teach them alchemy but not his and his sensei. And it will be worthless if Roy destroy not enough part of Riza tatoo, her pain will be vainly.
I never really think about how they could die after being together for so long. I like way you describe Riza's pain, her death. I buy it all. To sum up you did good job.