Reviews for Scars of War
Hayden Avery chapter 2 . 11/14/2011
Good story
A chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
Oh my gosh, I loved this! Seriously it was great. I wish there had been more chapters to the story, but it was a good ending regardless.
GOLD fish 945 chapter 2 . 6/2/2011
Wow, I read this ages and ages ago on Sugarquill. But it's still so very good. Evan Jameson. I still think that's genius, just because I would have been lame and named him James Evans. Ahhh, love. :) Fantastic.
Whispered.Silent.Hope chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
You are an amazing writer and have an amazing talent.
MrsGinnyWeasleyPotter chapter 2 . 1/28/2010
oh my is this finished...updated last 2002? goodness...are you still alive...coz i really likie your story...
xXMiss.BrightSideXx chapter 2 . 9/19/2009
aw that was awesome!
SiriuslySad chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
only one word for your last paragraph...aw!
deadheadwookie27 chapter 2 . 1/7/2009
Absolutely loved it! I loved every part of it, it was one of the best fan fictions i have ever read! Don't get me wrong, there are some good ones, but this is by far the best written. It is basically grammatically perfect, it didn't slow down nor speed up, and it kept my attention the entire time. I'd give this a five out of five no problem! Thank you for writing this great piece! I loved how Harry was an Author, a reclusive one at that. It was great. I'm definitely referring this to people and re-reading it.
Owl Emporium chapter 2 . 10/27/2007
Oh my god...GAH! I loved this SO much! :]]
Loyd1957 chapter 2 . 9/27/2007
Extraordinary story. Everything captured in 2 chapters. I really enjoyed it. You do have a handle on writing and the english language.

I really loved it. I will look for other stories of yours.

Thank you
Lady Jacceline chapter 2 . 7/23/2007
aw! Good story.
wishesanddreams chapter 2 . 6/12/2007
Let's get started on the constructive critism...

Wonderful plot! It's a great idea, but I don't think you did it justice. Sure, it was good, but it's only 2 chapters! This idea could be at least 20! If you went through and wrote more to the story, I think readers could have captured Harry's emotions a bit better. The entire meeting Ginny thing was so rushed...but yes, you do have a good writing style. The small clues put in about him writing of scars, his name, and everything was nice...but elaboration and a longer-length, once again, could have taken it to a new height. It was pure genius how you made him write about events that were based on things in his own life...but with the tweak.

I'll say what I said to my friend: This idea could be the plot of a future movie! Or even a book...of course it would not include Harry Potter in either...

Keep writing!
anonymous.individual chapter 2 . 4/13/2007
wow.
RH chapter 2 . 2/25/2007
I don't like it in the least. This story could have been awesome but it's just flat. It ends too quickly and not all of the characteristics in your own story seem to match! Harry spends all this time after the war hiding and then just runs back home when he sees Ginny? Not likely. Too bad...
lillygrl28 chapter 2 . 2/12/2007
this is really good u have to finish it
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