|Reviews for Ice Prince Alchemist|
| Gir240 chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
I just love this story :D
| LoneWolfsRage chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
hehe please continue
| Scaehime chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
Typos and forgotten words I noted while reading:
Good like with that - luck
bring out his eyes more,' Maria - Maria shouldn't be italicized.
'per-verbal' - proverbial (?)
The f word in a t-rated fic?!
What did the heck did I do - What the heck
Abet a feminine looking one - albeit
They all over towards the side - all looked over (?)
Kicking Denny or in the behind - kicking Denny in the behind
While turned his hair - while Zephyrus turned his hair
""So - "So
If something happens then. The YOU - happens then YOU
Why shouldn't we. - we?
These lovely lady - ladies
Prologue skin contact - prolonged
Fear Armstrong battle spikes - feared
And why do my teachers say? - what
My way either. - either."
Appeared to floating - to be floating
I am and alchemist - an alchemist
But we're sure how effective - we're not sure
Pissing dangerous and slightly unstable off - pissing off dangerous and slightly unstable people
They just raised or influenced by them - they were just raised (or) influenced them
I'd offer to beta read the usual way, but I don't really have time for that this semester, unfortunately.
Fanart of 'Mira' please!
That superiority speech reminds of Quirrell's speech on power... Intentional?
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
I like it! **
| Jostanos chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
You do have a few grammer/vocabulary/spelling errors, Kitsune, in various parts of this chapter. It would be nice if you would have them fixed, but to me they give the story a little character. :)
Apology accepted. :)
| Sakura Lisel chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
*lol* why did Miles grab Zeph and forcibly throw him into the elevator like Zeph was going to do a runner like his mom does every year? *lol* Zeph said so to himself that he hated vacinations almost as much as Olivier did, but he forces himself to suck it up and go get a shot and not do an unmanly thing like run away in terror at the sight of a needle like his mom does. *lol* so what was with the snatch, grab and throw Miles did to Zeph like he expected the kid to run away after all these years of NOT making a fuss about needles? *lol
| ultima-owner chapter 18 . 10/17/2013
Truth used his body, what did he get in return?
| Hakuryukou79 chapter 18 . 10/16/2013
Nice chapter. Looks like Truth dealt with the problem personally. I look forward in seeing more of this story.
| AyameKitsune chapter 18 . 10/16/2013
This is so AWESOME! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/15/2013
| ultima-owner chapter 17 . 10/14/2013
they were creative when they beat up the dude
| Gir240 chapter 17 . 10/14/2013
This is an amazing story you mixed two of my favorite things perfectly and why isn't there more stories like this it's always ed becomes a teacher and even those don't go past the third chapter. I love the Armstrong family!
| Scaehime chapter 17 . 10/14/2013
So how old is Zephyrus in this chapter?
Riza taking notes on Olivier's insults... XD
Good luck finding your USB.
| vampireharry the 2 chapter 17 . 10/14/2013
Woo whoo, go Mama Bear Olivier and Ninja Miles! Anyway, another awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!
| Jostanos chapter 17 . 10/14/2013
Apology accepted, my friend. :)
My own apologies for not responding the normal way.
for some reason one of my IPs is acting rather screwy so I had to use the alternate to read and reply here.