|Reviews for Look Closer|
| Mrs. Ace Merrill chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
I absolutely love this, you have a gift for writing! You are truly talented!(: Amazing(:
I especially loved this, soo much emotion:
"And I grabbed him again because I couldn't take the empty feeling."
That was beautiful, everything was beautiful!(:
Please update soon.. I LOVE this sooo much!(:
| CherryPezFoo chapter 5 . 8/31/2012
Yaaaay! They're together Ahhh! Finally! And Chris had better kick some cobra ass. You know I mean... the cobras, not.. a cobra .. Because im pretty sure snakes don't have asses O.o
| IAPhoenix2015 chapter 5 . 8/30/2012
well, leaving a review. lol. cute ending with the dancing
| miseryXlovesXmyXcompanyX chapter 5 . 8/30/2012
Awesome story! :)
| CherryPezFoo chapter 4 . 7/14/2012
YES!:D Adjectives!:') I'm so proud of you! :P Although (unfortuanatly) It was very short, I totally loved it!:) It was very proffesional, very well written and most of all short and snappy which is what I love most about your writing. Poor Veronica:( She should totally tell someone :'l I promised myself i wouldn't cry! :''''l. So much for that -.- Dun Dun Dun Chris Chambers to the rescue! ( Loving the bookcover btwz ;))
| CherryPezFoo chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
I looove this story so muchh!:') I like how she's got the scar, an imperfection but Chris still loves her :D unlike any other guy on the planet who want the stupid blondey booby girls
-.-! I like the way you write, short and snappy, straight to the point the complete opposite of the way I write, I take about a hundred words just to say "they looked at each other" i do prefer concentrating on emotions rather than actions. I like to paint a picture with words Haha :L what can I say, i love me similies!:D
If I had one critisism it would be to maybe put a little More emotinal intimacy in it, how does she feel when Ace attacks her? Scared, weak, defenceless? Other than that I loved it, please update?:)
Lots of love ;)
| IAPhoenix2015 chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
yay he saved her. i mean, obviously he would, but still.
| IAPhoenix2015 chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
aww its pretty adorable. i like the thing u did at the top with the look closer.