Reviews for Car Wash
horrorstar100 chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
LOVE IT!
SomberBlossom chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
I liked how you made the situation seem realistic, that Shizuo would actually want to have sex with Izaya. Also,this would make a great doujinshi! . I liked it.
AelanRyland011 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Sadly.. it still says hoes instead of hose. Other than that, its super awesome.
captain-shizu-chan chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
"Shizuo shouted, moving closer to him with the hoes."
"He through the hoes aside and slid off the hood of the car to take off his PE shorts" (also, that should be "threw")
"virginity be taken by a fucking water hoes!"
You have some "hoes" in there still.

"besides, we fault all the time" and that's suppose to be "fight", right?

Other than that I don't really see any mistakes at the moment.
SpiritofLove961 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Man this story was hawt and hilarious; the best kind!

3 Spirit
izzy chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
damn tht was sexi
mi fave pair is shizu-chan and iza-iza
IZA-IZA 4EVA!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This is pretty good. you should write what happens next. Shizuo is kinda creepy in this . i am your new fan! from-bleachgirl
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hi thurr. You should do another run through because the hoes is still hoes in one place among some other little things.

So... I'm guessing the other cars didn't get washed, lol. Headmaster is displeased.
kagako chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Baha, this was really good.
It made me laugh, it made me nod in encouragement. All in all, it was great!
S.Oyabun chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Goddammit! What the hell it was? Oh man that was amazing, you know. Awesome just like pru├čen, haha.

Lucky they were do it on the top of the car and not on the top of a roof wkwkwk. I couldn't imagine it!

Unique idea n.n that was really make me scream, laugh, and nosebleed. Haha just god job, then.
Maru de Kusanagi chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
hahHaaaaahahahahahaha
I just think the face of the teachers! Surely they were making a movie with them!