|Reviews for The Expecting Mockingjay|
| forevrkat chapter 18 . 7/27
OMG have you got me hook, line and sinker, this is a great story. Thanks for sharing it with us. I cannot wait to see how Katniss and Peeta get Vincent back from the Capitol and see Violet get her due, especially if 13 finds out what she did.
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/17
This was such a fantastic and intense plot, but there is so much left unfinished. How does Katniss get her baby back? Does Snow attack the refugees? Does Katniss come face to face with Snow? Does she kill him? Does Katniss get rid of Violet? Does Katniss engage Leon to help her get to Snow? Do Katniss and Peeta get married? What happens next? I would pay good money to read the rest. This story was more intense than the original Hunger Games trilogy, but it isnt finished.
| Lipush chapter 15 . 7/5
Don't know what suddenly made me think of this story. It was abandoned so long ago, but I still miss it. You ever plan on resurrecting it, maybe?
| dragonBug27 chapter 18 . 4/9
I loved this entire story up until the point Leon shot the peacekeepers and dragged her away... then it all got a bit crazy. Still, I read it til the final chapter you posted 'coz I'm no quitter ;) but yeah
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/10/2016
What? They're not even in character. Peeta would let her cry. Only emotional idiots say "don't cry" when someone is crying. and katniss just wants to get off in response to finding out she's infertile? This is so random.
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/10/2016
I really really enjoyed catching fire and falling down. I think you did a fantastic job with your rewrites. This story has a great plot outline so far. The only thing is that it is waaay too wordy. Lots of unnecessary and irrelevant and repetitive content. I find myself scrolling and scrolling looking for dialogue. Cumbersome to the point that I'm going to stop reading it now. But my point of my review is that your plot outline is solid, and youve proven that you are able to perform major rewrites and make your story readable (like you did in CFABD). Those skills are invaluable! So I wanted to comment because I think you have great talent. I had a writing teacher who once told me "your words are your babies and you love them all so much. But you need to kill your babies." Only leave in what you need for your story (for character development, to advance your plot, etc) and cut all the rest. Good luck with future writing!
| BrownB chapter 18 . 6/24/2016
I can not believe you stopped here. Seriously. As an author with unfinished stories, I think I just got a huge taste of what it feels like. But this story is a million times better than anything I've ever wrote - please consider finishing it, or at least map out the ending for us poor people who are dying to know!
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/28/2016
| Lizardphobia chapter 6 . 4/28/2016
This story is simply, the best. Gahhhhh. I love how it's unfolding.
This line: "Peeta..." I find myself saying, "always him."
This line just about killed me. The feels.
| FlyingFaeriesDance chapter 18 . 3/2/2016
Its been three years since you've updated your story and I hope you will finish it. I've read it three times now and enjoy it more each time I read it.
| harrypotterrocks13 chapter 18 . 1/24/2016
Are you planning to finish this story? I came across it this morning and have spent the whole day reading it. I noticed it's been awhile since it's been updated. I really hope you plan to continue!
| pinkgurl804 chapter 18 . 9/17/2015
While there are several 'pregnant mockingjay' stories out there, I'm enjoying the complexity and uniqueness of yours. You've taken the basic hunger games storyline and made it so much more. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Nik1627 chapter 18 . 8/5/2015
Omg! No! How can u peave us in such a suspicious situation?! Please continue the story! I just love the way it has been written till this point. Please continue the story.
| NotCurrent chapter 18 . 5/8/2015
Amazing amazing AMAZING! Please update soon.
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/12/2015
Oh. My. God.
I read the first story and this one after it - they are literally AMAZING!
This is by far the best HG fanfiction I have ever read - and I've read loads.
PLEASE UPDATE IT'S KILLING ME
I've just spent these past few days HOOKED