Hk-47

Hi Angeldoctor

I know that you've probably moved on or pushed this fic away, but despite all it's faults it is still a really good piece. It's probably my most favourite story so I'd appreciate if you at least think about continuing or rewriting this.

Big fan

“I came out here to get the measure of you haveAye, I have, I’m disappointed”

Query: may I kill the meatbags, master?
HK-47 is literally the best and most funny charactor in star wars.

The first thing to do before writing a story is to create a story outline so you know where you want to go

I couldn't make it to the end. Harry is so inconsistent when it comes to battle. I also dislike the lack of the Harry/Jaina romance. Why even have it listed as such when it is more Harry/Astraal than anyone else. Disappointment.

Very good story !

Pouvez vous publier la réécriture même si c est un peu tard?merci d avance

I have read this story upto 5th chapter and still don't know why it is marked as Harry Potter Star Wars crossover. I mean there is nothing in the story from HP apart from a character called Harry Potter. You could have as well called him Sheldon Cooper and it wouldn't have made any difference to the story..

I am sorry, while your prose is luid, it lacks skill and spark. In addition, you left out tons of plot information, such as how did ht etwo plans mesh? what were the problems they experienced inescaping? who are their captors [Vong, right?]?

Jacen, The Mighty Animal Tamer
Jaina, The Mechanical Overlord

Harry... The Metal Detector...

Could you repost the rewrite? I loved that one. This is good, that was better.

Never liked stories that had a spinless canon Harry as the MC.

Like the story already but how old is Harry?

you know, if they were adopted brothers the "taboo" would be somewhat understandable, but adoptive cousins? who complains about that? im like O?O