Reviews for A Jedi's Path |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's been 10 years since I last read this, but I suddenly had an old memory resurface and thought of it again. Let's see if it holds up as well as I remember. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I understand you wrote yourself into a corner and respect that you acknowledge it. I also hope someone continues this story preferably you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okey What I said before (chapter 8) must be taken back. I apologize for the comment and jibe I've taken to the writer. I am sorry (as of chapter 11). |
![]() ![]() ![]() So a simp, no, not really just Jaina is a horrible entity who want keep HP as her simp and not beloved by anyone. I think writer is an woman. Last line was written before I look at writer's name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story, too bad it feels as though it's been abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I like it a lot but, I should have NTR warning spoiler! 1. Mc and childhood friend love each other but both date someone else because reasons 2. Mc's girlfriend got raped and forced to beg for it. |
![]() ![]() Just put Astraal in the Harem with the other two |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just reread this, don't get why a good story has to become a shitty teenage wankfest. And then ending the story where you did because you didn't plan the basic story line out and didn't know where to go was a sick move. To fix the story just go back and delete all the parts where fucks every single female bar his mom and aunt or gets anyone he meets wetter than a veela on steroids in 30seconds of meeting him. As a child he apparently masters the force, but as soon as he gets a hardon vong, sith, spy networks, trillion credit companies, 2 apprentices all get forgotten so he can duck a twilek in the ass. It's literally like the last 10 chapters where written by different people who need to get laid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m sad this stopped. I really was enjoying it. Nakia was an awesome character and the Harry/World you built was really entertaining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's too bad this story looks finished. Truthfully, I'm a bit surprised the harem thing didn't gain traction, joke or not. Don't get me wrong, NOT having one when it's readily available (mostly monogamous female spy network hint much?) is a remarkable sign of character. And demonstrates the depth of his affections for the two leading ladies. But still, nice to entertain the idea |
![]() ![]() Uhh... what or who is Naruto and what or who is Tomoe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally, he start to grow up. It make my mood better. And i am a fan of Revan, and faith is hk47? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Because he is weak yet arrogant. You have a bad way describe it.. It frustating,, |