Reviews for A Jedi's Path
GhostnKC chapter 34 . 10/22/2023
I understand you wrote yourself into a corner and respect that you acknowledge it. I also hope someone continues this story preferably you.
Arcane Warhammer chapter 11 . 2/10/2023
Okey What I said before (chapter 8) must be taken back. I apologize for the comment and jibe I've taken to the writer. I am sorry (as of chapter 11).
Arcane Warhammer chapter 8 . 2/10/2023
So a simp, no, not really just Jaina is a horrible entity who want keep HP as her simp and not beloved by anyone. I think writer is an woman. Last line was written before I look at writer's name.
Mando-Vet chapter 34 . 1/14/2023
Really good story, too bad it feels as though it's been abandoned.
kingitou chapter 1 . 10/17/2022
Great story. I like it a lot but, I should have NTR warning

spoiler!

1. Mc and childhood friend love each other but both date someone else because reasons

2. Mc's girlfriend got raped and forced to beg for it.
Guest chapter 34 . 7/7/2022
Just put Astraal in the Harem with the other two
back2front chapter 33 . 8/15/2021
Just reread this, don't get why a good story has to become a shitty teenage wankfest. And then ending the story where you did because you didn't plan the basic story line out and didn't know where to go was a sick move. To fix the story just go back and delete all the parts where fucks every single female bar his mom and aunt or gets anyone he meets wetter than a veela on steroids in 30seconds of meeting him. As a child he apparently masters the force, but as soon as he gets a hardon vong, sith, spy networks, trillion credit companies, 2 apprentices all get forgotten so he can duck a twilek in the ass. It's literally like the last 10 chapters where written by different people who need to get laid.
PainedLife chapter 1 . 12/29/2020
I’m sad this stopped. I really was enjoying it. Nakia was an awesome character and the Harry/World you built was really entertaining.
Gunner711 chapter 17 . 12/9/2020
Good story.
Gunner711 chapter 11 . 12/7/2020
Good story.
WithinTheMadness chapter 22 . 5/25/2020
It's too bad this story looks finished. Truthfully, I'm a bit surprised the harem thing didn't gain traction, joke or not.

Don't get me wrong, NOT having one when it's readily available (mostly monogamous female spy network hint much?) is a remarkable sign of character. And demonstrates the depth of his affections for the two leading ladies. But still, nice to entertain the idea
Um chapter 7 . 4/20/2020
Uhh... what or who is Naruto and what or who is Tomoe?
HAEVs Sha chapter 17 . 4/17/2020
Finally, he start to grow up. It make my mood better. And i am a fan of Revan, and faith is hk47?
HAEVs Sha chapter 14 . 4/17/2020
Because he is weak yet arrogant. You have a bad way describe it.. It frustating,,
HAEVs Sha chapter 1 . 4/16/2020
Weak
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