Reviews for My Pet Mermaid
The weird thing chapter 2 . 11/29/2016
More, I laughed so much I cried,
vaatigirl123 chapter 2 . 3/3/2014
Dude the grudge is scary as fuck
Alanis P chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
Please continue... It's amazing
Guest chapter 2 . 9/2/2013
Can you please continue this? It's hilarious :)
Guest chapter 2 . 6/19/2013
This is hilarious! Will you please continue it?
VolatileDystopia chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
I would try to say this in a nice way but there isnt really a way to. This is awful. No really, 4 years from now you'll look back at this and see how bad it is.
Collection chapter 2 . 1/29/2013
Please continue! Alfred's POV is hilarious.
SayaD2 chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
Please please PLLLEEAASE continue!
just saying chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
It's a great story, I mean I've always wanted to read a story about a mermaid
Here's some advice: it would be better and alot more easier if you would leave out the smiley icons, a lot more people would read it, no offense I used to do that too until I stopped.
And no need for the ASDFLAK? thingy. It looks like your talking to us or writing a diary or something like that it doesn't go with the character. and when your going to write a thought for example for what you wrote 'oh? am I being saved? My hero!'
it would be better if it was italicized, you get what I'm saying?...if this um review offends in any way, I'm really truly sorry I just want to help... :)
vodkas sister chapter 2 . 7/21/2012
This was good, cant wait to read more
Animefreakgirl87 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
ff wont let me read ch 2 :'(
Jellybean-chan chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
LOL I like how you write Alfred's POV xD
Englandaru chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
:D I love eeeettttt!
Nymphaean Princess chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
omfg this is awesome keep it up