Reviews for The Alpha's Promise
Guest chapter 22 . 2/3/2023
Wow...double standards much Jake? :/ he had a man wh*re phase but Leah is not allowed to have had an extensive sexual past? I wish you had given Leah more than just 2 lovers...Sam and Jake :/

Anyhoo, enjoying the fic!
Guest chapter 19 . 2/3/2023
I don't know..I am not able to quite understand the reasoning behind Leah's behaviour. She is being it supposed to be payback for Jacob humiliating her in front of the elders?
Guest chapter 13 . 2/3/2023
Okay the religious section was a little is it that all of them believe in a higher power or rather 'God' specifically? It would have been a bit more interesting if you had changed it up with differing points of view...
TheRYU chapter 17 . 4/12/2022
The websight is not coming up is it still working?
Cranberrycheese chapter 1 . 12/15/2021
AYYYYYY. This story shaped my teenhood and you don't understand how happy I am to have found it again. This was always my comfort story and I find it to be top tier quality.
Melody Taylor chapter 38 . 7/25/2021
Great story. I love the JakeLeah plot. They work well together. I originally didn’t like Bella, she was so annoying, but I’m glad you redeemed her. Well written, lots of small details that all are up. Kept me reading for days. Thanks
sara chapter 12 . 11/12/2020
when Paul's say for Bella, lol. Ok, I not ok whit this lol
Dr1zzy chapter 36 . 2/22/2020
Good story
Blazeb79 chapter 36 . 11/5/2019
What an awesome story! It really is one of my favorites. Honestly dont know why it doesnt have a load of favorites. Great job
Blazeb79 chapter 18 . 11/4/2019
Wtf. Jacob is such a piece of shit this chapter. Seriously leah or bella. Hands down leah!
Wolf King 95 chapter 38 . 9/23/2019
I've read this story 8 times since you finished it and it gets better every time.
Loveforwolves143 chapter 37 . 9/21/2019
rachel625 chapter 36 . 9/5/2019
oh my gosh that was such a great story! At first I didn't like Bella and how she was acting. I'm glad she turned around and just wanted Jacob happy. I loved Jake and Leah's relationship. The fact that they were both dreaming of each other was a great feature of the story. I hated that the imprint was broken but you made it very interesting! I cracked up laughing multiple times with things like Leah's date. And your epilogue was perfect! I loved that they were able to come together with the Cullens. Little Alex's reaction and conversation with Jacob was great too! Thank you so much for the great read!
epiphany23 chapter 36 . 8/18/2019
This was amazing!
ossifiedtotem chapter 36 . 5/22/2019
Well that was an excellent read. Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed it.

The Jake/Bella friendship was nice- I really really despise them as an actual romantic couple but I really like them as friends. They work better that way, imo.

The Leah/Jake relationship was also good. Heartwarming n stuff but enough angst to keep it interesting.

I'd read your other stuff, but it's not really my thing. I have a vicious hatred for love triangles, and I also dislike poly. So Dual Commitment isn't really something that interests me.
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