Reviews for The Alpha's Promise |
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Guest chapter 22 . 2/3/2023 Wow...double standards much Jake? :/ he had a man wh*re phase but Leah is not allowed to have had an extensive sexual past? I wish you had given Leah more than just 2 lovers...Sam and Jake :/ Anyhoo, enjoying the fic! |
Guest chapter 19 . 2/3/2023 I don't know..I am not able to quite understand the reasoning behind Leah's behaviour. She is being cruel...is it supposed to be payback for Jacob humiliating her in front of the elders? |
Guest chapter 13 . 2/3/2023 Okay the religious section was a little boring...how is it that all of them believe in a higher power or rather 'God' specifically? It would have been a bit more interesting if you had changed it up with differing points of view... |
TheRYU chapter 17 . 4/12/2022 The websight is not coming up is it still working? |
Cranberrycheese chapter 1 . 12/15/2021 AYYYYYY. This story shaped my teenhood and you don't understand how happy I am to have found it again. This was always my comfort story and I find it to be top tier quality. |
Melody Taylor chapter 38 . 7/25/2021 Great story. I love the JakeLeah plot. They work well together. I originally didn’t like Bella, she was so annoying, but I’m glad you redeemed her. Well written, lots of small details that all are up. Kept me reading for days. Thanks |
sara chapter 12 . 11/12/2020 when Paul's say for Bella, lol. Ok, I not ok whit this lol |
Dr1zzy chapter 36 . 2/22/2020 Good story |
Blazeb79 chapter 36 . 11/5/2019 What an awesome story! It really is one of my favorites. Honestly dont know why it doesnt have a load of favorites. Great job |
Blazeb79 chapter 18 . 11/4/2019 Wtf. Jacob is such a piece of shit this chapter. Seriously leah or bella. Hands down leah! |
Wolf King 95 chapter 38 . 9/23/2019 I've read this story 8 times since you finished it and it gets better every time. |
Loveforwolves143 chapter 37 . 9/21/2019 LOVVVVEEEEDDD ITTTT! |
rachel625 chapter 36 . 9/5/2019 oh my gosh that was such a great story! At first I didn't like Bella and how she was acting. I'm glad she turned around and just wanted Jacob happy. I loved Jake and Leah's relationship. The fact that they were both dreaming of each other was a great feature of the story. I hated that the imprint was broken but you made it very interesting! I cracked up laughing multiple times with things like Leah's date. And your epilogue was perfect! I loved that they were able to come together with the Cullens. Little Alex's reaction and conversation with Jacob was great too! Thank you so much for the great read! |
epiphany23 chapter 36 . 8/18/2019 This was amazing! |
ossifiedtotem chapter 36 . 5/22/2019 Well that was an excellent read. Thanks so much for writing this, I really enjoyed it. The Jake/Bella friendship was nice- I really really despise them as an actual romantic couple but I really like them as friends. They work better that way, imo. The Leah/Jake relationship was also good. Heartwarming n stuff but enough angst to keep it interesting. I'd read your other stuff, but it's not really my thing. I have a vicious hatred for love triangles, and I also dislike poly. So Dual Commitment isn't really something that interests me. |