| Reviews for The Alpha's Promise |
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   viau1 chapter 34 . 7/15/2013 Amazing chapter and I agree with you on killing Charlie. Sad but a nice way for Bella to have her HEA. I don't know how far in the future, but I would love to see some sort of reunion between Bella, Jake and Leah. |
| Tara Maria chapter 34 . 7/15/2013 So sad about Charlie but I get why you killed him off. And I can't see Bella with a normal human. Lol. :) |
| KendieV chapter 34 . 7/14/2013 dang poor Charlie! but at least he went out a hero aww Bella :( but hey girls finally standing up for herself in the relationship! bout damn time! it's nice that Bella gets a HEA in the end, as much as I dislike her at points her and Edward just got together like PB&J I love that Jeah are gunna live and get old I mean Dirty Old Man Jacob? how awesome is that LOL luuuuurve it ! :D |
| missclearwater80 chapter 34 . 7/14/2013 Awww the last chapter was so sad but sweet too. I can't wait til the wedding! :) maybe 10 to 16 years? Not sure but it would be sweet for a puppies running around! :) |
| Geneu chapter 34 . 7/14/2013 Funny, I just thought about this scence, where Leah and Jacob would hold Bella in their bed, before I reached it. It's just a right thing to do. And Bella will get her HEA. Is her love would've been wholehearted, if it wasn't Edward? On the brighter not, the wedding is next |
| Loretta's Purple Orchid chapter 34 . 7/14/2013 I've finally gotten caught up with this! I shed a few tears reading this and it was just an amazing chapter! I'll admit, I got a little excited when you mentioned the Brotherhood! It's sad to see this coming to an end but it was great to take this journey with you and your writing _. Great job! |
| ShadowPast620 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 As much as I hate to see Bella with Edward I can totally see your point that it was the only way for her to get her HEA. As for the Epilogue... Alice said all the wolves would imprint. How about a sentence or two on how that goes for the pups? Please, do continue. |
| Dotty92 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 Awesome great! I cant believe they came back lol glad she with them tho. Jacob crying was heart felt, i cant believe JBNP is closing. Im crying :( |
| Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 This was a nice chapter, sad but nice. I can't wait for the next chapters, and I say five in the future is good. By then everyone should be imprinted, and/or have a baby or two running around. :) |
| fandom-freak16 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 Poor bella |
| brankel1 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 I totally love it. I'm going to miss JBNP. WOLF GIRL'S FOREVER. |
| Elphaba85 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 Dying at the BDB reference! I love this story! I hope there's a chapter about the drunken antics of the wolf girls next! :P |
| hgmsnoopy chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 Fantastic chapter (poor Charlie though!) and even though Bella and her inability to deal with things drives me crazy I am glad that she stood up for herself and ended up with an HEA. Love the wolf girl tribute too! |
| WarriorHeart90 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 JBNP closing has hit me out of left field throughoutly confused me but we are wolf girls forever for sure... I completely understand giving Bella her HEA... and killing Charlie was hard to read... so I can only imagine how hard it was to write... in the midst of all this craziness... your update came at the right time lol |
| frekles chapter 34 . 7/13/2013 I think this was a great way to end, in fact, the story could end right here as far as I am concerned. This was the perfect way for Bella to finally move on. And while you had us all in tears during the funeral, the Cullens arriving was a surprise and the ending...just a big sigh with a HEA. Well done |