| Reviews for The Alpha's Promise |
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   JJ1234 chapter 15 . 8/2/2012 wow really good chapter i love this story |
| Blackwater-fan07 chapter 15 . 8/2/2012 Paul is f'n awesome. It's great how he tells Bella like it is. Dominant Jake is really hot. Love the sexual tension between Jake and Leah. The Blacks really are something. It was shocking what Billy told Paul, it was funny nonetheless. I like how Leah is possessive over Jake and how their need to claim is mutual. The pack is very laid back, especially when it comes to each others sexual encounters. I think it's cool how the imprints have a hierarchy. This story is amazing! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| baker's huntress chapter 15 . 8/2/2012 I am so loving your version of Paul. I love how he doesn't hold back his words when talking to bella. Love the idea of a hierarchy amongst the imprints. I'm looking forward to seeing what being the alpha female entails. And will Leah phase? Or have some other Quileute super power? Can't wait to read more. |
| iloveebfanfics chapter 15 . 8/2/2012 yay an update and a rather blush-inducing one too ;) thoroughly enjoyed it. love blackwaters chemistry. sigh, even tho pauls explanations were a bit graphic, Bella doesn't seem to get it. I guess it'll have to be Jake and leah directly explaining to her... |
| Ash186 chapter 15 . 8/2/2012 That's right Bitch so back off! |
| Leilani972 chapter 14 . 8/1/2012 I love it! That was the best sealing imprint ever! Can't wait to read what's happening meanwhile in Forks! |
| Dahlia chapter 14 . 7/30/2012 So hot! Though wow! Leah's gonna be sore after that right? ;) |
| I.D.E.C chapter 14 . 7/30/2012 I love this story so far. Post soon please |
| KaramelKat chapter 14 . 7/29/2012 Oh boy..what is happening in Forks? I'm curious to know. Good job with the scene MM! |
| Inosolan chapter 14 . 7/29/2012 Woah! So HOT! :) That was worth the wait! I really liked that part of Leah and Jake coming together involved Leah proving to Jake that she loved all of him, being with her wouldn't be about hiding his wolf-side. |
| brankel1 chapter 14 . 7/29/2012 Fantastic them saying they love each other. |
| ArekWhitlock chapter 14 . 7/29/2012 damn..you wrote it perfectly! |
| ArekWhitlock chapter 13 . 7/29/2012 Very funny evening..I liked it.. ohhhhhhhh...Jake is so romantic... |
| ArekWhitlock chapter 12 . 7/29/2012 Bella is going to do something... |
| ArekWhitlock chapter 11 . 7/29/2012 I love Leah&Jake together.. Can't wait to see Bella's butt kicked:) |