Wow love this chapter. Leah and the jokes about Seth to funny. But that was hot with Leah and Jacob..! :)

OMG I luv luv it blackwater rock keep updating

I'm glad Jacob wants the imprint and letting Bella go. But if Bella wants to keep him as a friend she needs to be one and let him be happy. :)

Wow they did imprint and I loved the way you did it. But Bella had to ruin it she is being selfish. She has to let him go. :)

So is the bonfire were Jacob gonna imprint on Leah? The same dreams the hot..! And she has his wolf on her. Love that. And Seth knows something gonna happen. Now Jacob needs to let Bella go she is playing with him. Really liking this story ... :)

Yay Leah going home. And Jacob needs to let Bella go. And the dreams sound interesting. Loved it. :)

Poor Leah. I do like she's getting away and starting over. Like the. Start. :)

Leah is so caring, considerate and determined. She should've kicked Bella's ass right then and there. I loved this part:
'He grabbed her hand pulling her with him down the hall. "I'll be back in a minute Bells, I'm going to finish getting dressed and then we'll take off."
He pulled her in his room and pushed her up against the closed door.
"I make you happy?" she continued to glare as he smiled "and you're glad I imprinted on you?"
"You know the answer, you heard me." He lifted her putting her legs around his waist so he could look into her eyes.
"Tell me Leah, tell me what you just told my sister" she sighed and smiled wrapping her arms around him putting her forehead against his.'

I love how you write Blackwater! Not only is it hot and sexual, but you can tell they really love each other by how you describe their interactions. You're great at writing emotions. This is one of the best Blackwater stories I have ever read! I like your version of Rachel, Paul, Leah, Seth, Jake, Quil, pretty much how you write all the characters lol. Please update soon!

The love the tension between Jake & Leah!
"Leah honey, I don't want you to take this the wrong way but I need a minute, I am about to two seconds away from bending you over, fucking you senseless and claiming you."

The part where Leah and Seth (in wolf form) were on the beach was hilarious and adorable!
"Jake, where the fuck have you been, we've been looking everywhere for you, Rachel said I couldn't come home until I found your ass and made sure you were ok." I really like Paul & Rachel in this story! Damn, you write some extremely hot Blackwater!

The Leah and Sam moment was emotional and well written. Protective Seth is adorable. Glad Bella's plan to seduce Jake failed. Jake is even more sexy when he stands up to Bella.

I like how the Pack felt the power of Jake's imprint and how everyone supports Leah! Jake just needs to get rid of Bella. I love Paul, but maybe he should've let Rachel go so she could've kicked Bella's ass.

Leah's encounter with Quil was great! I like how you write Quil. The tattoo of Jake's wolf on her hip was a cool idea! Paul- sex on legs, well put Leah. Leah is observant. Ha, Seth is very straightforward. Rachel doesn't seem to fond of Bella either. I love how you write the characters!

I ttoally love that Leah isn't letting Bella get to her talk with glad Billy is happy.

OMG i just read this story and i think it's just fucking awesome. It's probably going to be one of the best blackwater stories i've read i think, i love it i really hope to read more so please,please update soon :D