LOve it

I love how Leah has such trust in jake and that she wants him to be him, and do the things and have the friendships he has had before her too. That she doesn't want to change him, but loves him as he is and doesn't have a problem with him hanging out with Bella.

Although I sort of think that friendship might end between Bella and Jake due to the way Bella acts. Now when Jake's with Leah he'll see even clearer what a little manipulating bitch Bella always has been and is, and that she never really been a friend to Jake, just wanted to use him...

Love it!

This was so hot! Love them together. Also love how they can have so much fun together and there's that real respect and friendship taking form that all relationships need to have. Love it!

Bella's such a selfish bitch! It's obvious she doesn't love Jake, she just wants to control him. I fear for what Bella will do with the information that Leah can choose what the imprint will become, I'm sure Bella will try to manipulate Leah to not choose Jake and try to give her some bullshit story about how much Bella and Jake love each other and that Leah is standing in the way of that,,,

I can't believe Sam said that to Leah, it's so cruel.

Loved the description of the imprint! It was very powerful, also adore Jake's wolf side and the wolf's sensations and the conflict and interacting of man/wolf.

Bella's such a bitch! And Sam has no right to say what he did, but I also do love reading about his jealousy.

Lmao at Quil! He's such a pig, eww. But he was also kind of sweet in that slightly gross way your little brothers friends can be... hahaha. I think it was very clever of him to talk about the barefoot running trend, that'äs a really good cover story for being barefoot!

I also love how Leah was concerned the Ateara's might need financial aid - that shows what an awesome person she is, very generous and taking care of others - just the kind of resources the alpha's mate needs! ;)

Also, love how both she and Jake dream of each other... although having your little brother hear and smell that - LOL, so embarrassing. haha.

Love Rachel's and Paul's friendship!

I really like what I've read so far, of Jake struggling in his on-off relationship with Bella and with his own feelings and confusion. Interesting to see what happens!

i don't know why this story doesn't have more reviews... really loving it hun, great job

"What is it Lassie, did Timmy fall down the well" she giggled and he snorted and growled, the dog jokes were going to get old fast. "What did you hear Seth, seriously should I be scared?" She started looking around, just as Jake walked out of the woods buttoning up his shorts, she stopped breathing and her mouth went dry, fuck, he definitely wasn't her best friends scrawny little brother anymore, he was gorgeous. If Paul was sex on legs then Jake was sex personified or maybe manifested somehow in the body of a god and then he opened his mouth and out came that low husky voice from her dreams that she loved.

"I'm the last thing you ever need to be scared of"

:swoons: ... i wanted more! your such a tease. ...

seriously Bella can go fuck herself ... im such an anti bella twi fan ... and your so spot on in calling out all her bull shit selfish ways in this chapter - just how she was in the saga

amazing opening love ... very emotional and beautiful words ...

"Yeah, just had to take a minute to be and emotional basket case and embrace my inner drama queen, you're running without shoes?" He chuckled, Seth was going to have his hands full keeping her out of the loop, she was way too observant for her own good.

"Uh…yeah, it's the latest thing, you run better without them. Google it, they are even making these barefoot shoes, but I can't afford those things, you know being a Rez kid and all I just opted for keeping it traditional, your lucky I'm not wearing my loin cloth." He tried making a joke, changing the subject hoping to get her attention off his appearance.

"Oh yeah, I've seen some people around campus with those, they are really weird looking with toes and all, I started running too, once I started college maybe we can run together sometime? But right now I really have to get to my Mom's house. Did you need a ride its going to get dark pretty quick here?"

"No, I'm good, didn't get this hot body accepting rides from beautiful ladies" he winked at her and she just shook her head. "Its good to have you home Leah, we missed you. Jake and Embry are going to shit themselves when they see you, and to think we thought you were spank bank material before." He wiggled his eyebrows while making a jacking off motion. I guess some things never changed, Quil was still a pig.

"QUIL ATEARA!" She smacked him in his rock hard chest; turning red with embarrassment, good lord she hoped they didn't picture her when they did that.

OMG ... too freakin funny babe... i love the build up on this plot

Omg I just read your story . Im in love with it. How are you not getting more reviews :D

So far this is an amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter.