Reviews for 50 Shades: Teddy's Birth
yeni chapter 4 . 7/18
Awesome book cant get enough
bmckenzie chapter 29 . 12/5/2015
I enjoyed your story and look forward to getting more from nyou.
nysone chapter 30 . 7/26/2015
Holy fuck that was awesome loved it! !
trinictx24 chapter 30 . 7/19/2015
Wow Danielle I loved your story of Ana and Christian. The way Ana supported him as always. The way he loved her and knows exactly how to show it. I know you've written this some years ago but I only recently found it through a very special FSOG fan group. I will read your original piece. I look forward to it . Mel
trinictx24 chapter 26 . 7/19/2015
I'm sorry about your grandma {{hugs}}

Mel
trinictx24 chapter 21 . 7/15/2015
Wow what a revelation! Loved this chapter.
trinictx24 chapter 19 . 7/15/2015
All I can say is WOW!
trinictx24 chapter 18 . 7/15/2015
I'm really enjoying your writing! I'm signed in under my husband account by the way it's Melissa. This chapter was very intense it made me cry. Great writing. Keep it up
Melissa
Debbie Lehman chapter 22 . 7/8/2015
I love this story! You have made me laugh and you have sure as heck made me cry lol! How you have writen the love and sex between Ana and Chritian is fantastic and I love it. I am so enjoying this. I know I have started to read your story after you have finished but I hope if you write another I'll know about it. This is great! Thank you so much
Guest chapter 24 . 7/6/2015
Keep going on. Your stories are absolutely perfect but I want more and more and more stories about little master!
Debbie 53 chapter 16 . 7/6/2015
When someone has something to say about your story but can't tell you who they are all they can do is be mean ignor them! You have done a lovely job of this story. I know this has long been finished and I'm just now reading it but I'm still going to give my opinion. I do a little writing myself and I have stopped to read your story and I am really enjoying it. You say you aren't used to writing about sex well you've done a wonderful job. I hope this isntt your last shot at writing because you're story is fun and good. Write another one on Fifty or Christian you do it so well. If you do I'd love to know so I could read it and tell my friends about it. Thank you for allowing me to rea\d your story my name is Debbie Lehman I'm retired from the library in my home town and love to read and write erotic romance, so don't stop. Again if you write more.
Debbie 53 chapter 13 . 7/5/2015
You have done this chapter proud! I love the way you handled the surprise and the sex scenes were amazing!
Debbie 53 chapter 5 . 7/4/2015
For a first time writing a sex scene you were great! Your story is wonderful and I am enjoying reading it very much.
evycullen chapter 30 . 6/19/2015
I dnr knw if u r going to get this msg...bt seriously m gonna say that this is the frat fanfic which has fircd me to review. I hav fallen in luv with ur story writtng style...U R THE BEST...U made me fall in luv with christian Grey all ovr again...thnx to u fr writtng this...do continue writting...m an indian nd here nt many people read fanfics bt trust on this...m gonna make as much as people i can to read this...jst luv u...mmuuahh
Cheryle chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Tears are running down my face . . . a very heart warming, emotional chapter. This makes one feel like they are a part of the "family".
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