Reviews for 50 Shades: Teddy's Birth
nysone chapter 30 . 7/26
Holy fuck that was awesome loved it! !
trinictx24 chapter 30 . 7/19
Wow Danielle I loved your story of Ana and Christian. The way Ana supported him as always. The way he loved her and knows exactly how to show it. I know you've written this some years ago but I only recently found it through a very special FSOG fan group. I will read your original piece. I look forward to it . Mel
trinictx24 chapter 26 . 7/19
I'm sorry about your grandma {{hugs}}

trinictx24 chapter 21 . 7/15
Wow what a revelation! Loved this chapter.
trinictx24 chapter 19 . 7/15
All I can say is WOW!
trinictx24 chapter 18 . 7/15
I'm really enjoying your writing! I'm signed in under my husband account by the way it's Melissa. This chapter was very intense it made me cry. Great writing. Keep it up
Debbie Lehman chapter 22 . 7/8
I love this story! You have made me laugh and you have sure as heck made me cry lol! How you have writen the love and sex between Ana and Chritian is fantastic and I love it. I am so enjoying this. I know I have started to read your story after you have finished but I hope if you write another I'll know about it. This is great! Thank you so much
Guest chapter 24 . 7/6
Keep going on. Your stories are absolutely perfect but I want more and more and more stories about little master!
Debbie 53 chapter 16 . 7/6
When someone has something to say about your story but can't tell you who they are all they can do is be mean ignor them! You have done a lovely job of this story. I know this has long been finished and I'm just now reading it but I'm still going to give my opinion. I do a little writing myself and I have stopped to read your story and I am really enjoying it. You say you aren't used to writing about sex well you've done a wonderful job. I hope this isntt your last shot at writing because you're story is fun and good. Write another one on Fifty or Christian you do it so well. If you do I'd love to know so I could read it and tell my friends about it. Thank you for allowing me to rea\d your story my name is Debbie Lehman I'm retired from the library in my home town and love to read and write erotic romance, so don't stop. Again if you write more.
Debbie 53 chapter 13 . 7/5
You have done this chapter proud! I love the way you handled the surprise and the sex scenes were amazing!
Debbie 53 chapter 5 . 7/4
For a first time writing a sex scene you were great! Your story is wonderful and I am enjoying reading it very much.
evycullen chapter 30 . 6/19
I dnr knw if u r going to get this seriously m gonna say that this is the frat fanfic which has fircd me to review. I hav fallen in luv with ur story writtng style...U R THE BEST...U made me fall in luv with christian Grey all ovr again...thnx to u fr writtng continue writting...m an indian nd here nt many people read fanfics bt trust on this...m gonna make as much as people i can to read this...jst luv u...mmuuahh
Cheryle chapter 1 . 6/13
Tears are running down my face . . . a very heart warming, emotional chapter. This makes one feel like they are a part of the "family".
deborah baker chapter 30 . 6/11
thankyou for your 50 shades follow up storys they are so moving, so emotional you have a true talent, would you ever consider publishing them I think more people need to see the love story that plays out after the books end it really was a rollercoaster to read the highs and lows of the true love story of Christian and his new life with his loving supportive family thanks x
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25
Love it :)
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