|Reviews for Alice in Candyland|
| Briar chapter 57 . 1/1
That ending was so sweet ! (pardon the pun) I have been reading this for the past two days and am extremely pleased at how this turned out. I am now off to read some more of your stories. And so parting is such sweet sorrow that I bid you adieu.
With great love for your stories,
A huge Willy Wonka fan. ;)
| Guest chapter 57 . 8/24/2014
omg. this is the best fanfiction i've ever read. it's so good! at the end while willy was dead i felt like the caracter. there was something missing. when he appeared if kind of cams back. thank you so much for doing this story, ily xxx3
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 57 . 6/9/2014
Oh god. The last chapter. Okay.
This. This was beautiful. How you described their life together after the factory. Willy's death. Her familys death. I especially loved the whole bit at the end 'I can't hear as well I used to but sometimes etc etc'. That was amazing. Perfect. Beautiful. Wonderful. Gosh darn it.
I think I teared up a bit in this chapter. This story has been absolutely amazing. The plot, the characters, your well developed original ones and the accurately portrayed existing ones, the writing was impeccable. I don't know how to describe it. But thank you for this story.
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 56 . 6/9/2014
Hahahaha Alice getting dressed. loved their little conversation. Also glad her mum finally accepts it. :D Their wedding. Gosh. Your writing gets me really emotional. Gonna draw out the last chapter a bit. I'm really attached to this story. Sad to see it end. :(
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 55 . 6/9/2014
This was so sweet :3
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 54 . 6/9/2014
Oh damn. That reunion. That was so perfect. Had to remind myself to breathe. This chapter made me so happy.
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 53 . 6/9/2014
Great timeline of Alice's years after Willy. It's sad to see the lengths she went through, but also good to see that she kept moving forward because that was what is good for her instead of wallowing in self pity.
I'm so glad she's going back to London to see willy! cross fingers
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 52 . 6/9/2014
Fuck. Dysphasia you're killen me here. :'( Pooor alicee
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 51 . 6/9/2014
Willy's back story. Wow. That was great. Also, that goodbye was brutal. :'(
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 50 . 6/9/2014
That was beautifully sweet yet sad. What a wonderful surprise Alice got. :D
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 49 . 6/9/2014
THANK GOD. 3 He remembers! Grrreat chapter
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 48 . 6/9/2014
:( My heart broke for Alice in the part where she woke up and asked "It wasn't a dream, was it?". The last sentence though. Sorry if this review is brief, need to get to the next chapter already!
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 47 . 6/9/2014
Oh shit. This chapter. Where do I begin.
The dream. Alright. That was beautiful. Absolutely WONDERFULLY written. I love the subtle transformation between John and Willy. The was fantastic. The way you described the scenery, I could just picture it in my head. It was actually so beautiful.
And then Alice wakes up. You think she's actually awake, but it turns out to be a dream. Thank god. I got scared.
Okay. The Cafeteria scene. HOLY SHIT. What the hell. Your writing had me on the edge of my seat. I love the originality. The concept to these unborn souls in minusland. Oh wow. When it gets ahold of Willy.. I actually got so sad as he held her down half way through the window. Again, you described the scene perfectly and vividly.
But damn. When he wakes up and can't remember anything... I think I'm getting a bit involved with this story but I think I got a bit teary. All of their memories, 'Gone with the wind'. I don't know how you're going to conclude this one, but I am indeed very curious. Thank you for this marvellous, heart-wrenching, action filled chapter and thank you for writing it so perfectly.
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 46 . 6/9/2014
Great chapter. Willy's gifts were very thoughtful! Hahah kim and her watermelon shorts. :3 Loved the fluffy bit at the end. He said I love you. Awww. Alice didn't say it back. :(
| AutumnEmberlynne chapter 45 . 6/9/2014
Hahaha oh Alice and her failed attempts at seduction. Also I laughed at the ninja part. Great chapter!