|Reviews for The Night Train|
| NikkaHi chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
First of all I think it is a good idea for a story, but there are some mistakes that really needs to be looked into because they disrupt the whole story, first of all you should decide whether you want to write in first-person or third-person because at one sentence you say "Fuji..." and in the next it's "I/me/my..." and this seem to be a rewriting of another story because in the middle of the story Fuji is suddenly named Eric... O_o other than that, good job :)
| Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Crazy, creepy, and well written! And it kinda reminds me of one really old "Hey Arnold" episode... But, yeah! Great job!
| Darkness Nemesis chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
What a particular story, but i really like it.