Reviews for Road Trip
PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Oh my gosh, you had me rolling! It's funny because at my house, my mom is the one who hoards paper products. I think she's waiting for the paper product apocalypse. We will be ready.

Just one of the gems: "I like to be home, too." He paused for effect. "After all, that's where I keep most of my paper towels."

And my mom has an obsession with keeping paper towels, baby wipes (even though I'm fifteen and my brother's eleven), blankets, and a change of clothes in the car. At. All. Times.

And she's always smug when we need any of the above. "Oh, you mean this? I thought you didn't this in the car?"

sammynanci chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
There's no timetable for updates on this, but I'm thinking about it becoming a multi-chapter story chronicling the woes of Sam's carsickness over the years...because obviously they do end up doing a lot of cross-country traveling.

Jump of happiness with the alone idea of a series of one shots with this subject matter! You are a genia! Others it is to say that I adored John's humor, jajajaj, Mary a captivation, it was giving myself great a sorrow to know that he still had only a month of this life that so much he was longing, buahhh, and to the boys, in end. Were not they in the Impala? I wait with anxiety for the following ones!
skag trendy chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Great start hon. Kind of heartbreaking to know that in less than a month Mary will be dead and the Winchesters will hit the road whether they want to or not.

Can't wait to read more on this. Well done!

Kind regards,
ST xxx
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
SO adorable and family-fluffy and great. Nice job! :)
SPN Mum chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I really liked this look at the Winchester family before anything bad happened to them. The ease with which John and Mary teased each other, the way Dean imitated his dad, the way Sam responded to Dean comforting him. It's all good. Too bad it didn't stay that way for them. I would love to see you write more of these. :)
pandora jazz chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Wonderful glimpse into the Winchester life before Mary died.

I had to smile because John had so many paper towels and he got to use them.

I loved Dean's line to little Sammy, "I'm an awesome big brother".
So true!

Nice job of throwing in comments about moments to come such as the family doing a lot of cross country traveling, only it would be without Mary.

My only small complaint about the story was I couldn't picture the Winchester family in a mini-van, especially with this time period. I just tried to ignore that and instead enjoyed your story. :)

Thanks for sharing another story with us.
Until next time, take care.
goldfishie1 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Awwww, sick, baby Sammy! And awesome big brother Dean! Love it.

I need more, please. You know how I love a sick Sammy!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Sick, baby Sammy! Love it! I loved baby Sammy calming down when Dean held him. Definitely awesome big brother!

John and his paper towels made me laugh. They did come in handy!

I want more, please. Sick, puking Sammy makes me happy, poor Sammy muffin!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Aww that was sweet and it would be nice as a multi chapter! Loving it again!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Oh my god, John and his paper towels. That was too funny! I really hope you do continue this as a multi-chaptered fic, because the carsick Sammy storyline has a lot of potential.

Jeanny chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Oh yes more carsick Sammy please! It's like really precious, adorable crack!
zekeschance chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Oh how I loved this! No one, I mean no one, writes Mary and John as good as you! I could relate to this whole story. Been there, done that! But the way you describe all the details make it so visual to the reader. And of course your humor is second to none! Loved little Dean repeating after John about the Sparkle paper towels. So darn cute! And Mary's thoughts had so much foreshadowing that it twisted my heart. Great idea of continuing this as Sam grows up and deals with carsickness. Thanks so much and loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This is adorable! And Dean's such a big brother even at four!
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Ha! You beat me to my begging! More updates of carsick Sammy! Love it!

Loved John's obsession with paper towels

Dean's sweet worry.

Mary dropping the f-bomb.

this was all kinds of wonderful.
Sweeter than puppies and kittens.

I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This is wonderful!
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