Reviews for Dead Island
Becca chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
its pretty good curt nice dialogue interesting characters very few errors id have some one beta it? i enjoy it and look forward to new chapters
JamesFames chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
Not bad, but try to add some more cursing in it. Won't be the same. Other than that, keep it up!
Dancer girly chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Good job on the second chapter! Keep it up! It's really gross though :p :)
Coraa.47 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
It's really good! But sometimes you put like I woke up in his bed and hat doesn't exactly match. And wow you put yourself in there ;) haha. Good job!