Reviews for Gashu Bell and Zeon Bell: Twin Prince Chronicles
BloodPokemon101 chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
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Joshweiser22 chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
Hey Steven! Long time no talk! Wanna Steam chat?
innovator1 chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
Yeah, Yeah. I said I wouldn't read this story because it's write off of "Twin Bell Princes"...but I skipped a couple chapters for I can see what you did differently. Chapter 6 is quite different...
On the first day or near it, Zatch finds Kiyo's that's a couple months before Zatch in the Manga found Kiyo...
Yugioash chapter 3 . 7/12/2012
Nice job! I especially like how you use Gigano Reis and Rashield.

I hope you don't mind me keep using the english names of characters and most spells in my reviews. I just find it easier to use them because I know how to spell them better than most of the Japanese names.
Yugioash chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
I like the story. It seems like my 'Twin Bell Princes', but with slight changes as well as you using the character's japanese names instead of their English translated names.
innovator1 chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
I have a really, REALLY important question for you.
The chapter was decent...
Good actually.
But before I acuse you of something.
I need to know, did Yugioash give you permission to use his story as a timeline?
This chapter is very similar to Twin Bell Princes's chapter 2.
The only difference in this chapter is that, it looks like you've edited it along the way.
Joshweiser22 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Seems pretty good. Thing is, I don't know the story well so I coudn't say for sure but, good job with your first fanfiction!
innovator1 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Wow, nice intro. I wonder if you're going to go through the childhood years quickly, or take your time with it...
And again, the intro was nice, it made me want to go back and repair my broken intro's.
You've taken a different twist it seems to other two stories out their. Which is Cool.
Zeon Seems to be more like Gash. actually seems like a "Loving" Father...almost.
Some weird things going on, like Zeon also saying "Unu". I just thought it was a Gash thing, up until now.
Don't quite know what made the King change his mind about separating the twins...Perhaps it was that vision of Zeon and Gash working together...