|Reviews for Saving Up|
| HollBeth chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This was cute and sweet! I wish I'd seen this contest before it started!
| Rita01tx chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
You so had me just as irritated and in love with him as Bella! Brilliant little o/s'!
| Decca31 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Great story. It all felt so real-just beautiful. Kinda reminded me of my husband :-)
| Maplestyle chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I loved this when I read it for the contest!
| mauigirl60 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Oh this was a wonderful story! I cracked up about him stealing toilet paper, that's what made me want to read it when I saw this come across my alerts. How sweet that he lied about what he was saving for to throw her off the track. Kind of like that story The Gift of the Magi. Great job, sweetie! xox
| aidanmomma chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Absolutely amazing. And just what I needed. Xoxo
| sfspeedy chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
THis was terrific! THank you!
| b3j02 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Awww I loved this story! I didn't realize there was a contest going so I am glad you shared it here! I loved this story!
I was on the verge of tears through most of it while Bella battled her conflicting emotions but I was still smiling as she was recalling her memories and his sweetness. The tears finally came when he proposed and it was just a sweet sweet story! Thanks for writing this. It's wonderful!
| LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Awwwwwww, I loved it!
| DreamerRoad chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I really enjoyed this one... :)
| lolou chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I love it!
| snoopylover60 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I kinda wanted to smack Bella, and letting her boss touch her ass. Then not say anything... GROW SOME BALLS ALREADY! But,I understand her to. Thats how I was when I was younger... Kept my mouth shut and took all kinds of crap!
I did like the story, I hope she learns to speak up for herself. ( my mother-in-law, she is when I spoke up. Bitch still 20 years later)
| Marie One chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This is why I keep thinking the way Bella is written she is an IDIOT.I would have taken the job and we would have talked really talked. He if he is great can write anywhere and email it in.
| 1853kaz chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Loved it! :)
| Elbee96 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I voted for this one. Adorable.