Reviews for The betting game
i-want-chocolate-now chapter 2 . 9/8/2012
aw, this is so sad, poor Becker
i had to laugh at Abby though, she was hilarious
hope you continue this soon
xx
BananaLollypop chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
:O i... i don't know what to say...

MORE PLEASE!

Yup, i think that just about covers it... XD
Mijo54 chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
excellent chapitre ! mais vous ne nous dites pas ce qui est arrivé à Matt ! ce n'est peut être pas le propos de votre histoire mais j'aurais bien aimé savoir ce qu'il est advenu de lui ! pensez vous vraiment que Becker se conduirait comme un goujat au restaurant avec Jess ?
à bientôt de vous lire !
Martin-J-Christopher-Freeman chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
Nooooo Becker, don't walk away! Just kiss her! Kiss her Becker!

Looking forward to more X
Martin-J-Christopher-Freeman chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Love this fic :)
Mijo54 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Vous nous promettez une fort longue histoire ! Mais il me semble que vous avez oublié une petite chose : Jess sait comment stopper les prédateurs de l'avenir, il suffit de faire passer dans les hautes parleurs de l'Arc des ondes sur une certaine fréquence et çà les stoppe du moins çà les ralentit suffisamant pour les tuer ! je ne pense qu'elle ait pu oublier après l'expérience qu'elle a eu avec Lester au moment de New Dawn !
Qui va gagner le pari ? Becker et Jess se laisseront-ils manipuler ?
à bientôt de vous lire!
safi-ry chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Connor, connor, connor, didn't you learn the first time you hit her with a dart? At least this one wasn't sleeping dart. Connor would have been dead. Lol. And please upload more chapters!
Connor Temple chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This was very hard to read, and soldiers running out of bullets? -WHAT?

Agree with your guest reviewer.
Speech should be written on separate lines.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
When the bio scanner was set off and triggered the lockdown, I thought it was Rex who caused it again! I thought either he escaped from the menagerie or Abby allowed him to roam free again.

Little did I know the Creature responsible for the lockdown was much more dangerous than a harmless flying lizard.
Sarah chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I really like the sound of this story, it sounds really good. Can't wait to see the rest of it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I found that confusing and difficult to follow.

Try putting Speech on a seperate lines. - New lines for each person talking.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Great chapter.
Good luck Connor :)
Update soon please.
Rhesa chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Definately want more. Though i don't know if i can wait till december for the conclusion! But please keep writing :)