Reviews for Betrayal Of The Heart
marksmom chapter 6 . 7/14/2012
Awww! So cute! I liked this chapter a really showed that Arthur learned his lesson. Kudos, My Dear!
A Smouldering Soul chapter 6 . 7/14/2012
Loved it :D stupid sex ban lol
Grizzo chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
A Smouldering Soul chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
grrrah damnit arthur needs to try harder and merlin needs to learn to listen.


sad fustrated reader
Sherlockedholmes chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
Aw that was so heartbreaking, I feel so bad for Arthur, he really is trying to make things better :'(
I was so sad when Merlin went to sit by Freya's side and when he drops to his knees after the fight. Poor Arthur!
I think that in this, he's every girl's dream, well not in the part that he lied but when he tried to make amends. He's like a lost puppy! I can imagine him with tears in his puppy dog eyes and a pout! Makes for such a cute picture! :D
But seriously, every chapter I fall more in love with this story! It's very nicely put together and I love the tiny little details (like the picture of them kissing, LOVED that!) I just can't seem to get enough of it! I'll probably read it again and again after is finished! xx
Forever Cullen chapter 4 . 7/13/2012
oh poor Merlin :'( :'(
Forever Cullen chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
oh I love it
poor Arthur and Merlin :'(
foxgodess07 chapter 2 . 7/12/2012
that was good update soon.
Magpie1600 chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
Now can we have some retribution on Cenred and Valiant, please.
American Bullfrog chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
I love it so far and cant wait for them to make up. Im like falling in love with all your fics and im sorry if you keep getting all these emails about me favoring everything its just a bad habit. I shall see you soon though :) ciao
Sherlockedholmes chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
Well I was listening to the song jar of hearts (glee version) when I started reading this so I was like "oh crap, here come the tears!" and then it changed to Cry! I was in tears reading this! This is so beautiful, it is sad and so emotional! And poor Merlin, Arthur should have listened to Morgana! I have to say that one of my favorite parts were when Uther is angry at Arthur, I think you were genius to include that and it makes this story even more special! I also loved Morgana in this and Lance, these characters really add something special to the story! It's just very cohesive and all these pieces work perfectly together! Loved every part of it! Your friend is very lucky to have someone as talented as you writing for her! xox
A Smouldering Soul chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
So depressing
A Smouldering Soul chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
I hope merlin wont be too pissed when he finds out Arthur's original reason. Loved the chap
Cathcer1984 chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
The footies was hot but then the sex... even hotter ;)
Forever Cullen chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
I loved it, but I fear trouble is just around the corner for our two handsome heroes
can't wait for tomorrow :)
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