Reviews for Betrayal Of The Heart
Sherlockedholmes chapter 3 . 7/11/2012
I love this story more each chapter! How's that possible? I love all the funny special bits, I loved the dinner scene, had me laughing for a good 5 minutes! I love Hunith, Balinor and Morgana and what they give to the story. And I like how Morgana looks out for Merlin, it's cute! And OMG the sex scene was HOT! The part where Merlin gets out of the shower naked was sooo funny! I really can't to read more! Thank you for all of your stories, you amazing writer! xx
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
oh no i see heartbreak on the horizon!
Grizzo chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
He seems so what?
marksmom chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
This is a great little story...for some reason, though, I think I've read it it up on AO3? Anyhoo...Kudos, My Dear!
Cathcer1984 chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
Yay for Morgana! They are so happy together!
foxgodess07 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
i get the feeling that this will blow up in arthur's face. update soon.
Forever Cullen chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
Its nice to see them dating, but I see it heading for trouble :'(
I love it :)
Sherlockedholmes chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
Aww that was just what my little black heart needed today! Despite Arthur's previous intentions, he's being really sweet, I like it, a lot! I loved the part with Morgana and her threatening Arthur, it was very amusing. Even though I hate seeing Merlin in pain, I really can't wait for the trouble that's coming, I'm sure it will be very interesting! Another great chapter! I can't wait for tomorrow!xx
A Smouldering Soul chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
Very amusing :)
Grizzo chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I hate that Merlin gets hurt, but I sure hope Arthur pays and
A Smouldering Soul chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Great story as always
Meyli Vaisyl chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Hum... Merlin will never forgive him. Well, he will but I don't think Arthur deserve it. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Sherlockedholmes chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I loved loved loved this chapter! This is so good, I like this type of stories! OMG I can't wait to read the next chapter, I know that it will be amazing! I'm so excited right now, like a young puppy with a new toy, so embarrassing! Congrats to your friend btw! xx
Cathcer1984 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
*happy dances*

I love it! :D I can sense angst coming!
i am the catalys chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
There should ge a t but i ran out of letters i dont feel like loging in right now but good job hope to read more soon
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