Reviews for Centurial
Windarian chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. Its quite the concept, very original, and of course stunning word-choice. Just beautiful.
Rosa Cotton chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Beautifully sad. Your imagery here was stunning - "lovely eyes were crumpled like violets."
I-am-a-Firefly chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
That's sad.
I never really thought about it that way.
I guess she would be really traumatized- 100 years!
New customs, new inventions- everything and everyone she once knew would be dead.
Very nice writing style.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Ah! I love it! Such fabulous imagery. "crumpled like violets" and "blossom bud mouth" - I really like that you keep the flowery theme. Also some great wordplay in there, like "plump-pucker-full" and "glass-clear" (I feel like there's an actual literary term for that, but I can't remember what it is).

I think my favorite bit is:

And her sleep was so golden it was red blazing

And so silver it was white

And one hundred years is a long, long time.

-There's a rhythm there that is lovely and the colors are so evocative.

Great job!

Captain
ArgentNoelle chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
oh, this is very beautiful.