Reviews for Crowbar
UrbsunPsychic chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
I liked this opening a lot.

I'd like to you expand on this for a couple pages if you're able.

I reckon this would be a deeply engaging fic.
RegularPandaHero chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Daaaw! thats so sweet! I hope you continue this soon.
KelpBass chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I think what you've got here is a really good start. I would like to see more added onto this piece so that it is a more satisfying read. You could lengthen it by adding scenes about some of the notches, like when he added them onto the crowbar or something, anything really to pump up this piece. As I said, this is really good, and I think with the right prodding, it can be really great. I would suggest try to at least get it up to 600 words. My general rule of thumb is a thousand words per chapter or I won't read it, but I'll compromise with you as this since you did say it was short. ) hope that helps!
Doomyheadcrab chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I like it. good work!