I have read this story a few times but only to completion twice. It is brilliantly written and has incredible characters. I love your versions of Harry and Albus, love the magic and deities, and especially love the badassery. The open ended ending of the story really works for me. Harry has his wish of traveling the world, he’s working to help Albus, and (in my opinion) can finally pull of Albus’ whimsical ways. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. On occasion I stumble on truly wonderful fics and while I do think things could have been better (what in life couldn’t) it is truly one to remember.

Wow

Underage sex is a no go for me, im not gonna read this anymore, and I wouldn't recommend this fic to many people

I've been really enjoying the story up until now, Fleur and Harry flirting, grabbing each others arse it's just a bit unrealistic between a 14 and a 17 year old and it makes me hella uncomfortable. I hope this isn't a permanent feature of the fanfic

just a small reality issue in chapter 6 Ice floats in water so bones encased in ice would have a reduced weight underwater and could float upwards not sink down because of the Ice.

when you have sufficient power, you can do whatever you please, without the concern for the pesky repercussions

ok this is getting really crappy
im done

why tf is he actively searching for someone to sleep with.
this makes him seem like a creep

Oi future me don't read this.

merfolk are people, not creatures. Harry massacring them as he did is extreme.

Well that was one hell of a fic! Thank you for actually giving consequences to people's actions, what with Harry aging 30 years. Most people don't do that. I really loved the final fight, that was awesome to read.

WELP looks like I was right

I have a feeling that Fleur's dad is going to be the Death Eater that killed Arthur. Just a gut feeling, nothing really backing it right now, besides they are both French males obviously.

I knew he wasn’t going to do anything with fluer, for someone who was so eager to see her, his only real interest seemed to be in the answer to a question he could have put in a letter to begin with and spared everyone the waste of time and effort of actually meeting.
Also why bother make the risky suggestion of having sex on her fathers desk if not trying to get caught, may as well just have the superior comfort and versatility of the bedroom less tidying up to be done afterwords also, and more likely to keep her In the mood.
This could have been set up in much better ways without leading fleur on/betraying her/wasting her romantic interest.

Seems like if Ron had Harry’s power and ability to go with his tactics he’d have probably been able to stroll back unharmed leaving having either forced the attackers to flee, or having put them all down.