Reviews for Wait, What?
fridelain chapter 12 . 10/5
Why would Kingsley not cotton on to the strange request and read the note, using magic to fix the seal issue if required.
fridelain chapter 11 . 10/5
I did draw that conclusion, the moment I read that line, and I was 11 years old at the time.
Pointer3109 chapter 11 . 6/2
Ginny was the first magical girl Harry met is the 1st book. The first is the one usually matched with the hero. More often than not.
While the first story was left open, Rowling never actually had a world planned out and made things up as she went.
Still, I was pretty sure Ginny was the girl intended for Harry. Had a bet with myself. I won!
Detsella Morningdew chapter 13 . 5/27
Yeah, while I don't think something like spanking is always horrible (it is when done in anger btw), beating someone with a broomstick?

Either Rowling was abused herself or she was really leaning into the idea that wizards have extremely outdated ideas about child rearing.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 10 . 5/27
Yeah, Ron isn't evil, but he shouldn't have been given that many chances either.

Honestly, Harry should likely have dropped Ron when he started bullying Hermione in first year. Harry should hate bullies.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 8 . 5/27
Yeah, that line bothered me when I first read it. What, it's impossible to kill them AND they can breed?
Detsella Morningdew chapter 6 . 5/27
I think this was literally just that she had to keep things, at least on paper, child friendly.

Seriously, though. YA/Teen books are allowed to depict torture and mental horror, but death pretty much always has to be a forbidden topic.

I'd imagine this is the publisher's fault, really. Or Rowling is stupid, but the excuses given here makes me think she was definitely aware of what the trio really should have done here.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 3 . 5/27
Yeah, Hagrid has a serious case of thinking TOO well of basically everyone and everything unless he's specifically proven wrong.

That's good... unless you're in charge of people's safety. Then it's dangerous.
Blank54 chapter 8 . 1/29
¡Esto suena genial! Como alguien que ha leído otra historia en la que se encontró una vía mágica para eliminar dementores nunca se me ocurrió recurrir al exorcismo como medida. Es muy novedoso.
Blank54 chapter 4 . 1/27
Amo que incluso después de tantos años siga descubriendo historias en las que se note la falta de experiencia (cof sentido común cof) de JK.
Me gustan mucho sus notas de autor!
gusjo chapter 4 . 11/1/2023
OMG how I laughed at the lobotomized Hufflepuffs. I cried a little. I am a terrible person.
maiqsmail chapter 16 . 10/27/2023
To this chapter: wow, this is one of the few Ginny/Harry pairings that do not astonishly suck arse.
To this fanfic: very interesting points raised in many chapters. I've read a lot of fabrics with bashing and picking plotholes so I have had some impressive experience, yet here there are numerous new plotholes to utilise. Wow.
maiqsmail chapter 15 . 10/27/2023
Holy macaroni, that explains so much...
maiqsmail chapter 4 . 10/27/2023
You tell them! And don't forget about rape-in-bottle Love potions! This is literally a key element of tragic story that gave us Tom Half-blood Riddle! And now Weasley twins are selling it in diagon alley legally.
dragonheart117 chapter 1 . 9/11/2023
makes albus severus name even more creepy, like hes recreating a new body with his name
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