Reviews for Naruto: The Lynch Pin
Dragoncyber22 chapter 10 . 5/18
continues the story
DocSlendy chapter 1 . 1/16/2015
Ohh, this is a nice start; I like where this is going so far!
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
nice
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
nice job
DarknessDragon78 chapter 10 . 7/23/2014
MORE!
KingLoitl chapter 10 . 1/29/2014
update please!
Gruffard chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
Geez Naruto is a player. More girls chasing him. Flirting with half of them. Sure this isn't a Harem? Heh.

And the story starts, instead of the longer intro we've had for a few chapters. Looking forward to how you play this out. Thanks for the fun read.
Gruffard chapter 7 . 8/24/2013
Huh. If he knows Zyra, where is she? I do like the idea, even if your making him a bit of a playboy with most of the girls.
Gruffard chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
Ha. Love triangle. Be interesting if they are more then childhood friends. Funny that you had Naruto teach her the basis for her ulti.
Gruffard chapter 3 . 8/24/2013
Naruto has been around. Is he a player?
Gruffard chapter 2 . 8/24/2013
A simple spin on their stories. Will be following this one. On a side note, even if I was following the story, we don't need such a large recap of last chapter.
Gruffard chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Interesting start. I assume Ahri was the kyuubi or is the replacement for him? Looks to be a fun read.
chm01 chapter 8 . 8/6/2013
a 100 chakra?! isn't that a bit too expensive?!
StrongGuy159 chapter 10 . 7/10/2013
Cool story continue please.
Psudocode Samurai chapter 10 . 7/8/2013
The plot thickens, and I'd love to see the Zyrah story _
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