|Reviews for What It Means to be Free|
| Darkabyssoflove chapter 1 . 9/18
Hahaha I'm 4 years late... this was so fucked up but great writing skills
| MikuWantsABiscuit chapter 1 . 5/9
Is it bad that I bust out laughing when he screamed "hamburger"? XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
Oh... My... God. Just wow. Just... Woooooooow. So brain dead. I don't know whether to love or hate this. I can totally connect to alfreds mixed emotions about what's going on. Arthur went too far with the camera. Wayyyyyyyyy too far. Just omg wow. So cold hearted to expose his secrets like that to the newspaper. Completely ruined both of their reputations. Glad they got a happy ending though. Sorry I can't give better feed back my head is just a little overwhelmed right know. Just know it's good. I'll be reading more of your stuff, already read the Invitational Year and the Sophomore Year. Continue writing... Just wow.
| FireFox Vixen chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
| reinacuz chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Wow... Just wow... I have no words for this... Well, except for the fact that it was downright perfect.
| Elleth of Hidden Lore chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
I don't know why you're not completely satisfied with this, because I totally am! I mean, sure Alfred was a douche at some point and so was Arthur, but they are both human, they make dreadful mistakes, and learn from them. They were young and stupid, but as they grew, they understood that they did love each other, but a bit too selfishly, and changed that. At least that's how I see it. I really do love this with a passion. Just a humble advice, splitting it into chapters can help making this easier to read, since it's long. But still, it doesn't take away how wonderful it is. I like it, I really, really like it :D
| Anon chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Hey, this is a fic I really want to read, and I have read the beginning several times, and it seems quite good. The only problem I have is it being only one chapter. Due to the sis of the story it makes it hard to find a place in your reading after leaving for a moment, so if it wouldn't possibly be too much trouble I would greatly appreciate if you split the story into chapters
| OutToGarden chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
It was reallllly hard to watch them destroy each other and although I don't think they would have realistically ever been able to bounce back and manage a healthy relationship, the final scene was really beautiful and yes, made me cry. I'm just a sap like that. So sappy Canada could harvest from me for years...okay wow that got really weird really fast. Never mind.
| ennflor chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
Despite what you're saying in your author notes, I think this fic is actually very good! I enjoyed reading it and got kinda emotional at some parts. Which means you did a pretty good job here! The fic also seems kinda dark to me... ah, well... I feel pretty sorry for both Arthur and Alfred. They both seemed so confused. Arthur didn't manage his relationship with Alfred very well and ended up hurting Alfred (somehow Alfred's pain brought emotion from me the most). But Alfred also was a jerk to Arthur so I feel bad for Arthur too, and I feel bad for him as he seemed to struggle and try hard in the relationship but not manage it and suffer from it. But it's nice that everything ended nicely for them. I can accept all the drama and all the angst, especially when the ending is good and happy. :')
I just think that maybe it'd be better to write the story, like... linearly? First past, then present, etc. I'm not sure though. I think you know better what would be best for your own story, haha. It's just that the whole part with remembering the past is pretty long so it's hard to return back to present when that part ends. It feels a little abrupt. Because I already got immersed into their past story and it was a little difficult to immerse back into their present. Idk how to explain.
But no, the story is still good! So even if you leave it the way it is, it's fine I think. :) Anyway, great story, yeah!
| K.L chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Continuation (I accidentally tapped the post review button. Tablets are exasperating): Although I have long moved on, this fic really made me look at my past in retrospect.
"We both broke that trust a long time ago, when we were young and cruel to each other."
Man, that line just hit me right at home. You don't know how I craved to say that to the one I had hurt and apologise so that we can finally have that closure.
Glad the story ended well for them. In my real life, I know I must work to have a happy ending as close to this. Hope that in my lifetime, there would be a chance for me to mend.
| K.L chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
Hello, this review might be quite old but I still would want to praise this fic for being a powerful one based on my opinion as an avid fan of short stories, be it original or fan fiction. Casting aside the flaws of describing a real BDSM community, how you have written the story and how the each character's motives were laid out is just brilliant and moving. Maybe, it's a litle biased on my part for I also experienced being in a relationship that utterly lacks clarity and proper communication. Back then, I once got through loving a person and loathing them at the same time. This fic really made me think of my past in retrospect.
| ThatCrazyGirlReading chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
This was really fucking long for a one-shot...and also I wanted to strangle Alfred for 1) having sex with the frog 2) lying to Arthur 3) being a asshole by publishing that story and using Arthur 4) being a total ass and stealing from Arthur 5) for not appreciating it when Arthur was nice to him (damn brat) so yeah I kinda wanted to kill Alfred but Arthur I got pissed at him for being fucking rude and filming Alfred yeah that got me upset. This was a well written fic and I can one is even if I can't write one! But now I must read more so good bye!
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Amazing story! I loved it! You are a very talented writer and this is one of my favorite fanfics. Keep up the good work!
| bea chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I hope this isn't seen as rude, just my honest opinion of this fic. i really don't like how in you a/n you say this is an exploration of the bdsm community but in the fic we're shown abusive tops and whatnot. Now there's nothing wrong with writing abuse or anythig like that but don't lable it as proper bdsm.
The ending felt so rushed too, after all that to get a wedding? i can't help but feel a bit squicked at Alfred marrying Arthur after the abuse he went through nor can I see Arthur easily forgiving him.
| VeryUncomfortabl chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
I'm gonna be honest I didn't even finish reading it, just because the entire representation of the BDSM community seems really skewed and it make me very uncomfortable to read. Treating the subs like commodities even out of play and while doms will ask others to 'train' their slaves for them it's some of the other things like I didn't see a whole lot of consent- and consent is a great staple among the BDSM community-, even when Alfred was with Arthur (not gonna go into the whole Ivan thing, because that's a whole different pet peeve that I'll leave out of this beyond being something of an abusive relationship) and it didn't seem like they ever stopped playing- which doubled my discomfort.
I don't know. I have a lot of mixed feelings, but like I said I didn't even finish the fic. As someone who is in the BDSM community and someone who has many peers within the community, I can say if I ever found any of these kinds of relationships coming into my life or my peers' lives...I would be scared.