|Reviews for Wish Coming True|
| Joanne110 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I think this is a pretty good fan-fic. But I just kept getting annoyed every time I saw Kotoko call the Irie's aunty and uncle, keep in mind they are not her aunt and uncle. Naoki and Kotoko aren't married yet, so she should just call them Mrs and Mr, or however she called them in the anime. I believe she called the mother Oba-sama?
| Laurel.Evermore chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
The story was great apart from it being too like the anime so it was hardly original. I like some of the phrases you used too, but I found there was a lot of tense confusion especially as you moved from past to present a lot.
Well done any how.
| Someone chapter 1 . 7/17/2012