I awlays felt bad for Carlisle having to put up with Edwards crap along with the rest of the family, the crazy shapeshifters and the many covens of vampires, include the Volturi. Poor Carlisle never catches a break.

Ame cada palabra. Gracias, gracias, gracias

Amo tu manera de escribir, de verdad que me encanta. Gracias ️

Omg the way I spend the whole day procrastinating because I didn’t want to finish this book. You’re books are always such a pleasure to read and I absolutely love everything about this book

BITCH YOU DID NOT JUST MAKE HIME LEAPFROG BLY

Another fantastic chapter! I love your depiction of the La Push boys' experience. It definitely was an area that wasn't delved into adequately and realistically in the origin story.

Wow, your writing is so good! I love your descriptions

That was a phenomenal story!

Is it safe to assume the reason that you have left fanfiction is because you've upgraded to professional author and are now properly appreciated and paid for your work? It wouldn't surprise me in the least.
I've certainly enjoyed rummaging through your impressive writing immensely!
Thank you so much for allowing us to browse through your imagination. Personally, I love it here!

Unquestionably brilliant! Beyond that I'm left speechless. BRAVO!

I've gotta say, this story is so-far perfectly balanced. I mean it's highly descriptive without being verbose. The vocabulary is relaxed without being lowbrow. The fight scenes are intense without being too angsty. And there hasn't been any lemons as of yet, though it almost feels like there has!
I'm certainly impressed! Aside from a multitude of typos which you already told us to expect, I'm ready to declare this a perfect story. (so far.)

Amazing, horrifying and heartbreaking all at the same time! I didn't know that was possible. Great job!

Wow! Definitely not anything I've read before! This certainly has my attention now. I'm in!

Rip Taoistelf

A wordsmith, an amazing author, the best writer

2015

Oh. My. Word. Besides The Movement of the Earth on AO3, /this/ is going to be one of my favorites. The intensity of Jacob in this is so original and WELL WRITTEN. I’m so excited for the rest of this.