|Reviews for Crave|
| Eli42 chapter 20 . 10/31
I'd love a Embry/Angela story!
| Eli42 chapter 6 . 10/30
I'm pretty sure I've commented before, but I was rereading and just wanted to say that Crave and Be Like Water are the best fics I've ever read and were so detailed and well written. I'd love to read more of that style. I'd definitely encourage you to continue writing and (if you're even still on FFN) if you have any suggestions for fics I may like I'd love to know!
| Pachipearl chapter 1 . 9/1
This is awesome. It's hard to find high quality Twilight fics, which this most definitely is. I love how you write the Pack, and I love how you give Bella a personality that is believably generous and good, and I love how complex and strong Jake is, and I love how you characterize the wrongness of the vampires. Based on your profile I gather that this isn't one of your favorite stories, and I have to admit that early on I was a little distracted by your artful and descriptive (maybe almost flowery?) prose, but once I got into the meat of the story I was so hooked. And I love it. And I'm so sad that I've finished and it's over. And did I mention I love it? I can't wait to read more of your stuff; I just wish there were more hours in the day.
| NeverGonnaDie chapter 1 . 8/18
I kinda really love how you brought up the birth control
| Tamerlane chapter 6 . 8/12
As if Bella of all people could even be remotely selfless. The premise of the story unfortunately has nothing much to do with the Bella Swan we have all come to despise. Charlie of course playing at tough guy has zero idea how close he is coming to getting his ass kicked off the fucking planet...although that might be fun to see i have no doubt it's beyond the limits of this little tale. Oh well. Anyway on and up. Lets see what we see, shall we?
| Jane chapter 9 . 7/6
I'm re-reading all your stories, and this one is a corker. I find myself getting agitated about the Council. What the hell are they doing to support their wolves? Why isn't there a medic to help with injuries? Why are they all on their own? Surely some tribe members could be trusted with the secret so they could help the boys. They've had a year or soto deal with the Wolves... it's only a story, Jane, only a story...
| pegasus5406 chapter 23 . 5/15
Awesome story hon...I enjoyed it very much, thanks, huggs. Peggy
| rosey16 chapter 23 . 4/27
I loved it. I loved it. I loved it so much. THANK YOU.
| ieatyourmuffins chapter 1 . 4/20
I'm pretty sure I liked this story more than the original twilight. You have a beautiful writing style!
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/24
Wow! Well written! You're amazing
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/11
Way too much detail gets boring at times
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/6
You went deep into the characters soul which made this one of the best B&J stories out there imo. The emotion and lust were spellbounding. I loved every minute of this somewhat dark ride. Woohoo! Thank you!
| MorenaGirl chapter 23 . 2/6
If this story doesn't prove you should be an award winning published author...
One of my fave B&J fanfic. Love your writing style.
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/31
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/27