|Reviews for Ginnungagap|
| CSG chapter 1 . 9/7
This is this weeks "story of the week" in my group, The Twilight Fan Fiction Finders... Congrats!
| LaSpia chapter 33 . 8/24
This is truly a fabulous story. I loved every word. It's really a lovely original idea where you've woven in our favorite loving fictional couple and family in a clever and believable way. I really have enjoyed it, and I am so looking forward to the sequel. You left it in a great spot for going in a new direction with her new life.
I guess if I had any thought toward improvement, it would just be for self satisfaction! That is, I'd extend the end by a few chapters to get to know them in their new environment. As we finally have Izabel and Edward together, it feels very brief. But, like I said, just a self-serving desire from a reader, not a criticism! I'm sure it's a more natural place to begin a sequel.
Really a wonderful story that I will highly recommend to friends!
PS. I learned of your story when it was Rec'd on Cafe Mom, Fic Pics #83
| jk chapter 27 . 6/29
I thought bella killed him? then all of a sudden hes up and talking to her and then hitting her with a sword?
bella is the weakest queen I have ever read, not even a queen at all
| jk chapter 11 . 6/29
I really don't understand why bella allows a servant to talk to and treat her the way she allows this prick to. and on top of that hes a fucking spy? he should be killed...like right the fuck now
| Regina chapter 33 . 6/22
Great story! Thanks.
| My Friend Alice chapter 2 . 6/17
I'm truly enjoying this story!
| karasmom chapter 33 . 6/16
This story was so fantastic that I stayed up most of the night and read the entire thing! I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment and Edward's pov. Btw, I found your story on TwiFanfictionRecs, and I will be voting for you!
| Reinbeau chapter 33 . 6/10
Found this on the twificrecs site.
Really enjoyed it, and looking forward to the next installment.
You certainly can't leave us there!
| KatHat chapter 32 . 6/9
I also looked up your title, Ginnungagap, and it has an interesting meaning: "gaping abyss", "yawning void") is the primordial void and has really cool pictures!
| KatHat chapter 33 . 6/9
I came to read this from the TwifanfictionRecs and realized I had started reading this years ago. What an excellent unique story!
I have to agree, the name Jarpr was a closer match to the name Jasper and then towards the end, using Audvard for Jasper's name when is was obviously a closer fit to Edward had me shaking my head.
Without a time period or location, the setting was confusing/misleading for me until you started mentioning Viking/Norse related facts in your A/N's. I always pictured Vikings as ship building invaders that lived in lodges or longhouses with animal skins for doors and bedding - not stone castles with numerous wings and twisting halls with many rooms and closets and doors that clicked shut. Since you didn't mention a time period, only the type of clothing they wore, maybe this was later in Norse history. And Reykjavik was mentioned several times but it is the capital of Iceland - an island - and is tundra and treeless. So I was scratching my head, but hey, it's fanfic and I'm open to any story line!
Even without trying to reason that kind of stuff out, what an amazing, creative story! I always stop, reread and admire well-written poetic use of language! What a delight to read!
You mentioned you were writing a sequel. I noticed on your profile you have started a companion piece to this in EPOV, which to me is just retelling this story, not a sequel.
Anyway, I absolutely loved this and trying to figure out wth was going on! Thank you!
| jvtkel chapter 33 . 6/6
Excellent story. You did lose me a few times as to who was what to who but that was probably more my fault than yours. Great story line, excellent character development!
| TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 6/4
Ginnungagap has been nominated in the poll to find the Top 10 fics completed in May at .com
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/29
The effort you have put in the story is astounding..the story in itself is very enthralling.
| SJPattinson aka if only chapter 11 . 5/28
The twists and turns keep me hanging on.
| Sassyvampmama chapter 33 . 5/25
Ireally enjoyed the journey you took us on. Perhaps it was because this was labeled as a Bella fic when I found it, I caught most of the clues that Edward was her Jarpr, though you did have me second guessing when you introduced Aurvard. Thank you for sharing this with us.